Serious editing.

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Just a warning, this story is going to undergo some serious editing in the next few weeks/months.
I had stated previously that this was my first story and not my best piece of work, but now I notice that the previous comment was a serious understatement.
My writing was, without question, shit.
So hopefully I'm gonna fix it and improve the story as a whole.
Ta.

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