My Next Life as a Villianous - Sirius Dieke/Ralph Walkt (7/5/2021)

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Originally posted on MAL.

There are plenty of problems with this series, but there is one that I can't talk about in the review and that is Sirius Dieke and Raphel Walkt. While it is true that Sirius wasn't the dominate personality and that might be explained away by the curse, I don't think that's completely the truth given the fact Sirius Dieke (the real one) and Raphael Walt, were in fact half-brothers.

Sure, there was that memory of his father's affair and the fact his step bother didn't care for him or his mother despite the fact he was in effect conceived by rape as it makes clear that she was with him only one time and didn't like it.

Yet, is that all? I mean, they're still brothers and while he may have been jealous of his half-brother for being born healthy, he might have a very different opinion on the matter, particularly since he knew his life was short. His mother, the way she was, didn't just hurt Raphel, but her own son, because her jealousy prevented him from possibly having a relationship with his half-brother.

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Of course, if I were to completely rewrite the series - I would lean towards Nicole as endgame for her, have none of the girls fall for her. Maria instead of confessing her love would in fact say she refuses to get in the way of Catarina and Geordo, while Geordo is marrying her not just because of the scar, but because he sees her as someone who needs protection, yet he's willing to give her up once he learns his best friends feelings and go for the girl he likes. Keith wouldn't be crushing on his sister, but would eventually end up with Sophia, leaving Mary and Geordo's twin to end up together, but the twin also sees her as someone to protect, but is worried that Mary is crushing on Catarina and is flustered at the idea of something scandelous happening, while Mary is worried about him falling for Catarina and ruining his relationship with his brother.

Sirius - well, let's create a completely new character for that.

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