Reviewer: Minooiii
Author of the book: Fifipencil11
Cover:
Your cover looks interesting and fun actually, but I think you can make it more attractive because, at first glance, I couldn't realise that it was bigbangtheory fanfic.
Title:
I believe the title is fine.
Characters:
The characters are from "The Big Bang Theory" series, so the fans of this show have already known them.
I should mention that you made the characters' personalities perfectly similar to the show so as a reader I could've imagined them in that situation.
Well done on that!
Plot:
I'm a fan of bigbangtheory, and I liked that you chose to write this fanfic for it. It was indeed a fun new idea and I enjoyed reading your book.
Also, I liked the way you made their conversations hilarious just like in the show which shows you're truly a creative person.
Grammar and vocabulary:
They were also good.
Engagement:
I believe it was fun to read and the readers will like your story.
Tips:
1/ It would be awesome if you could make your chapters longer since they were short in my opinion.
2/ I want you to narrate your story a bit in detail. Showing their expressions and describing the environment around them briefly.
I think it can be more fun if you make the story longer and more detailed rather than just writing their conversations so that your work will gain even more audiences.
3/You have the talent to write fun stories so don't give up and just keep going.
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