Reviewer: Minooiii
Author of the book: CrystallyAmber3
Cover:
It's perfect.
Title:
Your title is interesting and suits the content.
Blurb:
The first part of the blurb is good.
But the second part was a bit confusing in my opinion. I think it'll be good if you add a bit more explanation to your blurb so that it can catch the reader's attention more.
Characters:
1/ Jade is a girl who we can sympathise with her as a reader. I liked the way you describe her personality and her family because it feels real.
2/ Alessandro, a dominant boy, who makes the story more eye-catching.
I believe their chemistry as a couple is awesome!
Plot:
Your plot is well-written and it was fun to read. I think it has the potential to become a really cool story without clichés, so just keep going since you're doing great already.
I like the way you described their feelings, appearance, and every situation in detail, which is really helpful to imagine them better.
Vocabulary and grammar:
There were a few punctuations and typos errors, but overall was good!
Tips:
1/put space between your paragraphs in your first chapters so that readers can make in-line comments for that part.
Also, it's easier to read that way.
2/I'd liked to know those Spanish sentences meaning, so I thought it'd be good if you were
add a translation at the end of the chapter, as a P.S.
3/use more specific hashtags
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