Title; Ellie Mitchell Diary
Author; thatTJgirl
What is 'Ellie Mitchell Diary'? -An ongoing diary of a girl called Ellie Mitchell, of course!
Rating-
6/10
EBI-
-Obviously there's some grammar and typos still, a lot of the problems are the wrong use of commas, full stops etc. in parts but this is easily fixed (so not too big of an issue.)
-Your sentences are quite similar and less-complex. Not very developed.
-Use words instead of numbers. Using 3 instead of three when writing is like using text slang in a book and putting u instead of you.
Review;
The plot looks really good, there's deep character information and the story has a lot of potential. The writing is direct and gets straight to the point, with an underlying sense of clarity. It's easy to get into Ellie's head and feel how she feels. The writing really communicates how she's feeling effectively.
Do I recommend this book to a reader looking for a cool story to read?
-Yeah, sure!
Fancy checking this story out?
-Good! It's on my reviewed books library on my profile!
YOU ARE READING
Beautiful Books And Reviews
RandomHere you can find/receive: • Book Advertising (Features) • Book Ratings (/10) • Reads/Readers • Reviews • Recommendations • Improvements • Edits • Grammar Sweeps • Comment Suggestions/Corrections Honesty's the best policy and I'm too honest for my o...
