Beautiful Books And Reviews

15) Shadows Of The Past

Title: Shadows Of The Past
Author: LockRoomAndWrite
What is 'Shadows Of The Past'?
            -Basically, 'Shadows Of The Past' is about an orphan who has only one memory of her mother- a diary. Then, the diary disappears and when it's finally found, Puria (main character) has her life turned upside down. Atop of that, her life also changes when Rudy Henderson (another main character with a 'bad boy attitude') takes an interest in her.

Rating-
                     6.8/10

EBI-
                    Make sure to read through it and add punctuation wherever it is needed, and also make sure that all of the sentences make sense. You also might want to make it clearer when you're going in between past and present...

Review:
                     'Shadows Of The Past' has a sweet opening with somewhat potential. It's incredibly short, though. For an opening, it's the perfect length, but where's the rest of the story? I'm assuming that it's not completed because the blurb/story info suggests a much larger plotline with other characters, and in the opening we've only really met three characters. Work on updating it and continuing it- if you need help the Wattpad Community are just a click away (and you can always ask me for help :)) Your story has a seemingly great plot, and it could potentially quite popular!

Do I recommend 'Shadows Of The Past'?
                      -Yes, if you're looking for something sweet and partially sad to read. Otherwise, you might want to consider waiting until more chapters are uploaded so that you can read it thoroughly and vote/comment throughout all of it :)

'Shadows Of The Past' can now be found in The Reviewed List.