Title: Even Roses Have Thorns
Author: @silverstep11
What is 'Even Roses Have Thorns'?
- It's a great Werewolf story! Booyahhhhh!!
Rating:
9/10
EBI:
- More emotive language
- Use more details about the other characters, their appearances, expressions - make sure to detail and describe to the reader instead of telling them
- Remain consistent on if you're going to capitalise the she after !" or ?" etc
- Use more adjectives in actions (She grabs my shoulders and looks into my eyes = She suddenly grabs both shoulders hard and looks into my (adjective and colour) eyes)
Review:
Even Roses Have Thorns uses beautiful language to carefully and intricately develop a plot that will literally sweep the reader off of their feet. The writing style is so likeable and really easy to read - it's one of the stories that I read blissfully knowing that the writer can use commas 100% effectively, which makes for perfect reading and perfect stories. Despite being in a difficult tense, the writer manages to keep it mostly constant. This story is so easy to get along with, it's one of those books that will inevitably be impossible to put down! Read with caution, you may become addicted!
Blurb:
"Liesel Rose Lombardi is perfectly happy with her comfortable, predictable, good-two-shows life, where nothing ever happens that isn't accounted for.
Her weekend plans?
Study for the upcoming math test.
Her social life?
Squelched by soccer practices.
Drama?
Zip, zilch, zero.
Lise has good friends, good grades, and loving adoptive parents - what more could she need, or even want?
But when suspicious things start to happen - events that aren't accounted for - her perfect, predictable life abruptly comes crashing down around her.
Add to that a lifetime's worth of secrets, a past that's set on reclaiming her, and a whole lot of drama, and - well, what could be more unpredictable than all that?
Finding out that she's a werewolf, for one thing.
"Truths and roses have thorns about them."
- Henry David Thoreau "
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