I forgot to mention this in relation to last chapter. The criticism refers only to those of us born and bred speaking the English language and have been part of some form of formal education system from K-8th grade.
Meaning-2nd language English LEARNERS this does not apply to you.
Hell, I applaud you for taking the time to learn to speak/read/write the convoluted language called English. It has so many rules and exceptions to the rule it's no wonder we spend YEARS and YEARS learning all the ins and outs so we sound halfway literate.
Keep up the good work!

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How to Irk a Reader as a Writer
HumorJust random thoughts about things that writers do that irk me as a reader. Fueled by caffeine, lack of sleep, or reaction to something I've read. Take none of this serious! Be offended at your own risk.