I won't go into detail but I must know:
What is with these weak ass male characters fainting all over the damn place?
For reals. Fainting like a bunch of super weak ass damsels in distress. Bitch, get it together. Get you an iron pill, get your blood sugar checked, check yo estrogen cuz damn. These dudes faint more than the chicks do.
Ijs.
Oh, and that line "and then my world went black". There are so many ways to describe fainting/passing out/sudden unconsciousness. (see what I did there?) Let's stop using that line.

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How to Irk a Reader as a Writer
HumorJust random thoughts about things that writers do that irk me as a reader. Fueled by caffeine, lack of sleep, or reaction to something I've read. Take none of this serious! Be offended at your own risk.