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Diana O. Montgomery [A*]

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Antique Honey (Original. The story follows the students at Adelaide Academy, a prestigious boarding school for young men and women who wish to focus their studies on the whimsical world of Japanese lolita fashion.

[ That's a very pretty name. A very pretty French name for a school in American whose main curriculum revolves around Japanese fashion.

There's nothing wrong with it, it just seems an odd choice, maybe explain that the founder of Adelaide Academy was a French woman who was interested in Lolita or a French man who named the school after his daughter/wife. Forgive me if Adelaide Academy is in a town/something called Adelaide. As far as I could tell there wasn't.

Just give it a reason to be called Adelaide, at the moment it seems like an arbitrary decision.]

The establishments under the Academy prepare their students to become fashion designers, artists, and musicians in the lolita world.

[It's giving me Bauhaus vibes. Bauhaus was a revolutionary school of art in Germany, that brought together many different art practices, from performing arts to traditional fine art and everything else in between a lot like Adelaide Academy, but you know minus the princes and princesses.]

With their exciting school government of princes and princesses fighting for social power, there is never a dull moment!

[Now that you say, princes and princesses, I'm getting vibes of that bloody Barbie film... um... Barbie: Princess Charm School? I think. I will be answering no question on why I watched that film.

Are they like legit princes and princesses? Like Prince of Detroit, Princess of Chicago?]

I decided to have it be set in America, because the popularity of lolita fashion is increasing here and seems to be a dying trend in Japan.)

[That's valid reasoning.]

Full Name →

Diana Odette Montgomery

Age →

17 (She's in her last year at Adelaide)

[It seems to me that Adelaide Academy would act more like a college or university rather than a secondary school. Where they already have their base knowledge from a traditional secondary school, then they move onto focusing on their favourite subjects at Adelaide to gain a degree to then go into the world.

Do students at Adelaide still have to study English, maths, science, and so on? Or is it just the more creative subjects?]

Gender → Female

Sexuality → Bisexual

Species → Human

Nationality → American

Appearance →

Diana stands at 5'7". She has sharp but sophisticated features and skin so pale it almost appears translucent. 

[I understand that maybe you're saying 'so pale it almost appears translucent' as a prettier way of saying 'she's really bloody pale.' Nothing wrong with being pale, it's just that every other OC just happens to be sickeningly pale without a reason, just give a reason to why she is pale and that'll be good enough for me.

Is she anaemic? Or just doesn't go outside much? Something else?]

Her lips are a pale shade of shining pink, due to the lip gloss she always wears. Diana's red-orange hair is parted across her forehead and cascades down her shoulders. Her eyes are golden brown framed with thick, dark lashes. Diana's outfit usually consists of the Christel (Adelaide Academy is split up into different sections, each which has it's own name and uniform.) school uniform: a lassical ensemble of a high-collared blouse in a striking dark crimson that tied in an elegant bow in the front, a high-waisted skirt with brass buttons in a rosy, floral print, and a rectangular headdress that tied under the chin, decorated in soft rose-shaped lace with silk roses on the side.