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Ashlyn Adair

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An OC by magam321

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Fandom: N/A, Original. It's set in a world were supernatural creatures (witches, vampires, werewolves, etc) exist and, currently, are considered a normal thing. That being said, 25 years ago the Red War (a set of civil wars between species) ended. The story itself is set in a fictional city in modern days. After the Red War, cities became more self-governed, and in New Sattum (the afermentioned city) another war is brewing for the power over the city.

Note that while the story is a WIP, I have used the character herself for online roleplay sessions that were set in similar worlds/had a similar lore.

[ Your universe seems pretty interesting, which is good considering I'm not normally interested in supernatural creature oriented universes.]

Full Name: Ashlyn Adair

Nicknames:

Ash - a simple nickname, commonly used by people close to her; she likes it as it's both simple to use and sounds good

Lady Adair - she earned the official title of a Lady at the beginning of the XVII century, rarely does anyone use it now

Butcher of Newcastle - a title she earned by killing half of the city's population in the late XIX century after the town burned her lover on a stake for being a witch (witchhunts were common – the Red War wasn't the first inter-species conflict); she hates when someone calls her that as it brings up bad memories.

[ Great explanation just a little thing with her final nickname, she refers to Newcastle as a city and then a town after, just something to check the wording of. I think you meant a town in Newcastle burned her lover.]

Age: 414; appears around 25

Gender: Female (she/her)

Sexuality: Pansexual

Species:

Vampire (daywalker) - currently

Witch (unbeknown to her; dormant magic bloodline) - foremly

[ Assuming former witch heritage will hold some importance within her story which is probably a secret, so I'm not going to pry into that.]

Nationality: British

Appearance: Standing at around 178cm (around 5'8 ft), Ashlyn weighs around 60kg (around 132lbs). She has a curvaceous, attractive figure with toned muscles. Her body type is hourglass, but has quite broad shoulders. Ashlyn has slightly wavy, icy blonde hair that reaches the middle of her back. Her eyes are a light blue color, but it changes to a predatory yellow when her "vampiric side" comes out/when her fangs show/when she's under great stress or anger. Her skin is light and slightly pale. Her fangs are of a medium length for a vampire. She has no tattoos or beauty marks. Ashlyn usually wears expensive, elegant and often revealing clothing in toned colors.

Health: Due to her being a witch prior to her turning (which was unbeknown to her as her magic bloodline was dormant/was not activated), she is now a daywalker, which means she can walk in the sun without consequences.

[ Everything seems sound regarding her appearance and health. It wouldn't hurt to go into a little more depth into her facial features, such as nose shape, eye shape and so on as you have with her body. I have to say I greatly prefer daywalkers to the generic 'burn/sparkle in daylight vampires', though that's probably because I'm partial to Blade.]