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Gaia Torfree

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A Star Wars: The Clone Wars OC by Bitchford33

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Fandom: Star wars (Clone wars era)

Name: Gaia Torfree

Nickname: None

Age: Same as Ahsoka Tano

[ Probably best to specify his actual age. Ahsoka ages over the series so he could be anything between 14 or his late teens depending on how much time has passed since gaining his second lightsaber. Alternatively, you could state he's the same age as Ahsoka in season 3 for example.]

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Homosexual (But it dosen't really matter since he's a padwan and the jedi are forbidden from attachment)

Species: Mirialan

Appearance: Yellow skin, Short brown eyes, Brown hair, 4 ft 11 in, 115 pounds, Facial tattoos (common for mirialans) on his cheeks.

[ Have a think about further breaking down his appearance, think about face shape, eye shape, nose shape and so on. I'd describe his tattoos a little more just because of how significant they are to Mirialan culture and society. Think about how many he has and how complex the shapes are. ]

Outfit: I'm stealing Rey's outfit because say what you want about her but her outfits were awesome. Side note: On his costume just ignore gun holster.

[ Agreed, that's fine. I attempted to insert the image you sent but I'm clearly not as tech-savvy as I thought I was. Ouch]

Personality: He's very polite, kind and responsible, He can be a bit withdrawn when he first meets people but he eventually learns to open up, He usually thinks before he acts, he is the mom friend and tries his best to look out for the people he's around, he is somewhat naive, he can seem demanding but that's mostly because he's trying his best so expects everyone else to do that too.

[ Why is he withdrawn when meeting new people? Perhaps by trying to appear as a responsible and capable padawan, he reserves his true opinions/behaviour and therefore can seem withdrawn? He seems like he'd be very open-minded and forgiving perhaps when it comes to dealing with other people's opinions. A very live and let live attitude, perhaps you could look into that more, specifically to help fill out his strengths a little more.]

Weaknesses: Like i brought up earlier he tries to look out for others but he also sometimes forget to look out for himself because of that, he is easier to trick since he can be naive and think people has others best interest at heart when they really don't, he is not the bravest person out there like for example he faces Ventress alone he panics and dosen't perform very well and tries to run away instead.

[ He seems too optimistic, which you've mentioned when you say he's naive and believes everybody is looking out for others. Maybe have a deeper look at how this optimism could be a gift as well as a curse, perhaps others admire and depend on him for his optimism, you seem to have the negative side of his optimism down fine. I don't blame him from running from Ventress, she's the real g in the series, but how does he feel after lacking the courage to effectively battle Ventress?]

Strengths: He is good at following orders, He has strong determination to get a job finished, His kindness and politeness can actually be helpful in some situations.