ISAAC's OC REVIEWs

Augustine Dubois [F]

Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!

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Fandom: original (malaketions end)

Summary- (author here: you can consider this as a hunger games bootleg , I don't really care xD) France has been split into seventeen districts , each having their own mayor or ruler controlling it. And each of these districts are at war , and it's because of the lovely person that each of the mayors call their boss , the govenor. (Calling the govenor by his first inital: z) z is known to be a massive tyrant and is no help to either of the districts. So the mayors decided to work together with people to create an event known as the earth runner games.

[ French bootleg of Hunger Games does indeed do it justice, if it's pulling similarities from that series then it should be fine, fingers crossed. The reason to why the districts even created, their motives and such should be similar to the Hunger Games, well, either similar or spoilers, whatever it is I'm not going to pry too much into the reasons why of the universe.]

Full name: augustine dubois

[ All good.]

Nicknames: auggie (his cousins mainly use this nickname), Runt , squirt . Auggie is just a shortened part of his name, Runt was given to him due to him being somewhat scrawny, and squirt was given to him by the eldest cousins friend maria.

[ How does he feel about these names?]

Age:14-19

Gender: male

Sexuality: asexual

[ Does he face any problems with his sexuality? Any second guessing? When did he realise he was asexual?]

Species: human

Nationality: French

Appearance: augustine is 109 pounds and is 5'3 with fair skin and shaggy light brown hair and blue eyes with some freckles spread across his nose. He has thin, square framed red glasses.

[ Height and weight are fine, as is his appearance. How bad is his vision? How does he fair without his glasses?]

1 (casual: he wears a brown shirt and black pants with a light grey hiking jacket.

2 (games): the game uniform was just layered on clothing over the competeors casual clothing. It was a big dark grey jacket with green camp pants.

Personality: augustine may be known as someone who is easily scared and stuff, well he is, but he is somewhat intelligent and clever.

[ Timid and clever. In what way is he intelligent?]

He's quiet and rarely speaks to anyone but the people he trusts (ex:his cousins) , or if he's forced to when it comes to big stuff like interviews.

[ What does it take for someone to gain Augustine's trust?]

Though he can get easily scared , augustines stubborness can cause him to smack people in the face or shoot them in the cheek if you mess with him in the wrong way , though he'll end up likely regretting it.

[ Seems more like a short-temper than it does stubbornness. That being said we could link his stubbornness to his quietness, maybe he's too stubborn to talk to strangers because he believes that the strangers and something negative, perhaps potentially destructive and or dangerous seeing as there's a war on. With what you've written above if we just switch the 'stubbornness' for 'short-temper', that'll fit that easy.