[Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!]
Name: Anthea Nyx Weasley (later Wood)
[I saw a theory a while back that said 'all the Weasley kids minus Ron have names of British royalty or Arthurian names.'
'Anthea Nyx' doesn't really fit those criteria. Don't get me wrong I could very well see Anthea Nyx in the HP universe, just not as part of the Weasley family.
I don't mind 'Anthea' too much, after all, it follows the trend of having a not so common name with an average nickname.
'Nyx' as a middle name is a wee' problematic if you look at the other Weasley's middle names they all seem to be taken from past family members.
Seeing as Ginny's middle name is Molly, you can't really give Anthea that name after her mother. Try looking up the Weasley's family to find other names that could be passed down to Anthea, off the top of my head I remember that they have an aunt Meriel/Muriel {something like that.} Perhaps that's an option.
I'm also going to drop a wee' link to some Arthurian names for you to take a gander at.
https://www.sheknows.com/parenting/articles/988907/baby-names-from-arthurian-legend
I'm not telling you to go change her name, just to maybe consider the trends that the other Weasley's names follow.]
Name Meaning: Anthea means "blossom" and Nyx means "night".
[Close enough.]
Nicknames: Ann, Annie.
[How often is she called Ann/Annie? Do people know her as Ann/Annie or Anthea?
For example, Alex is known as Alex, even though his real name is Alexander, most people assume his real name is just Alex.]
Age: 15
Date of birth: 21st August, 1977.
Zodiac: Leo
Blood group: B+
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: British
Species: Human
Blood status: Pureblood
School: Hogwarts
[Did she consider any other magical school?]
House: Gryffindor
Year: 1-7 (1988-1994)
[Seeing as she's currently 15, she wouldn't have 6th or 7th-year education yet.]
Electives: Care of Magical Creatures, Ancient Runes and Muggle Studies.
Best subjects: Muggles Studies and Care of Magical Creatures.
Above average subjects: Charms and Transfiguration.
Average subjects: Ancient Runes and Defense Against the Dark Arts.
Below average subjects: Astronomy and Herbology.
Worst subjects: History of Magic and Potions.
[When you say worst and below average subjects, do you mean that as in failing those subjects or does she just not enjoy them, if it's the former and she was struggling, why did she pick three electives when she could have just done the two?]
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