ISAAC's OC REVIEWs

Esmé A. Frampton [C]

Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!

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Fandom: Original :0 It's set in the current world, maybe 2006? Before the major popularity of smartphones. In the story, the characters' D&D campaign comes to life, and thats about the whole setting.

[ I remember the smartphone hype picking up when one of my old friends brought their new iPhone into school for the weekly show and tell, I think that was in year 5, so like 2008~2009. You should be in the clear with 2006.]

Full Name: Esmé Alexis Frampton

Nicknames: Sonya (the name of her D&D character) used only during a session, Mr. Da Vinci (a reference to renaissance artist Leonardo Da Vinci) that her friend Jon uses, referring to the fact that she's learned four instruments and been taught to paint. The latter nickname is more annoying, as Esmé finds it rather tacky and unfunny, but she forgives Jon.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Species: Human

Nationality: Asian American

[ That would be more of her ethnicity than a nationality. Looking at her backstory, I'm going to guess she was born in America because it mentions Bloomsburg district/Pennsylvania and my amazing geography skills [totally not Google maps] tells me that's in America. It also mentions nothing of her having moved countries or having dual citizenship so I think an American nationality is a safe bet.]

Appearance: Esmé is rather short for 17, around 5'1 inches, with a weight of ~100 pounds (155 cm 45 kg).

[ That's all good.]

She has night black hair a couple centimeters above her shoulders, with sparse, light curtain bangs. She has large but proportional hands, her fingers calloused and her nails cut as short as they get, never painted.

[ Good relation to her skills with her calloused fingers and short nails, it's never fun to have to sit down and dig out paint from underneath your nails.]

She wears the same kind of clothing every day, usually a dark colored long sleeve shirt with bell sleeves, tucked into a pair of light wash cropped jeans, which end mid-shin, the ends curled. A slim, black belt and classic black nikes accent the look. Looks rather hipster.

[ I'd say.]

Her face is plain, with an absolute absence of freckles or beauty marks, though faded acne resides on her forehead. A naturally light Asian skin color, never tanning as she lives in northern Pennsylvania, only really going outside (on bike rides) with her friends during the winter months, as winter break and snow days come to their benefit.

[ Lovely, just mention the eyes and their colour and we're golden.]

Health: Good health, perhaps lasting stress because of the amount of extracurriculars and instruments Esmé is involved in, but hanging out with friends is always a good cure for such.

[ How does the stress make her feel? Does the stress have any physical effects on her? How much better does it feel when she's with her friends?]

Personality: Esmé is polite and quiet, keeping to herself. Around friends she's the type of person to really listen to her friends jokes and laugh along, not really making her own too often, except when she's feeling confident.