ISAAC's OC REVIEWs

Jack Peterson [A*]

Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!

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Original: In 1951 London, life was going well for those who had not fallen victim to 'The Butcher'. A serial killer who is suspected of killing at least four people and is a mastermind at framing people and running the Police Force in circles.

Lieutenant. Jack Peterson, a WWII Navy Veteran who is still trying to cope with the death of his wife, has his heart set on solving the case and catching The Butcher once and for all. But as he falls deeper down the rabbit hole and begins to realize what kind of person is behind these crimes, he not only endangers his own life and the lives of his fellow officers, but also the lives of his three kids.

[ Nicely opened.]

Full Name: Jack Peterson

Nicknames:

Jackie – Was given to him by his mother when he was very young, whenever he was crying or in distress, she'd call him Jackie because in her opinion it sounded more soothing. She continued to call him that up until his early teens. Jack's older sister will occasionally call him that to tease him.

[ What does Jack feel about the nickname?]

Location: London (haven't decided where yet, I was thinking maybe Greenwich?)

[ If he's going to be alright with all the boats on the Thames, and with the actual Thames itself {judging from his fears he should be okay with it} then it should be fine in Greenwich.]

Occupation: Police Lieutenant (currently)

Navy Chief Petty Officer (Formerly)

Age: 35

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Species: Human

Nationality: English

Appearance: Jack is a tab bit taller than average men around his time, standing at 6' and weighing 76.5 kg.

[ Height and weight are fine by the BMI.]

He has dark blonde hair that is cut at a medium length, slicked back and neatly combed with a left side part, caramel coloured eyes and white, fairly tanned skin.

He has a very slight shadow of a beard across his jawline and upper lip, he prefers a clean shave since, in his opinion, facial hair is too itchy and is hard to manage. He'll sometimes grow it out on occasion if he's working on a case that he'll stay committed to non-stop for days for even weeks to the point where he ignores personal health and hygiene, however, he'll rarely ever allow it grow beyond stubble.

Jack is typically seen wearing a very dark brown, almost black suit, grey waistcoat with a white dress shirt underneath accompanied by a red necktie, along with beige trousers and bright brown shoes that are slightly worn with use and age. This outfit is completed with a grey fedora. He also wears a wedding ring.

He has a small scar on his left temple after he was ambushed by an enemy soldier and almost taken prisoner if it weren't for his comrades close by. A scar across his left side where he was shot, and burn scars on his right arm with splotches of it trailing down his right side as well, these were from when he and some of his crewmates escaped enemy missiles hitting and destroying their ship.