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FEEDBACK PAGE!!!

PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK/COMMENTS AT the end THANK YOU!. 

Hi Y'all 

I was wanting to ask for feedback on these last few chapters and how you all like it thus far, its been hard to keep the climax or plot in order seeing that there are 5 main characters to keep in the loop as well as bad guys and events, LOL forgive me but I sometimes forget the "add" in character names I made up and have to go back and find it.  It's been a crazy few chapters for me with having a few books I'm working on. 

But, I love knowing what you feel and think or would even like to see. 

So I have to leave this page open for any Q and A's you all might have that I can address.  But I wanted to touch base on a few things and see if the story thus far is playing true to my vision. 

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The overall story is about Simoes finding out that she is destined to save men and vampires alike from victor who we all know wants her powers to benefit his no good ways and more. 

the story takes place 100 years after the original IIL chapters and I, of course, added that twist changing the storyline so to not copy others. 

Sebastian was a must add-in because it fit the part adn the storyline. 

I wasn't sure about the 5 mates idea but it just happened so I am trying to work around that as best I can. all characters have good qualities so it was hard to pick which would be her MATE for LIFE. so I made them all her's lol. 

she definitely will need all there skills to defeat Victor at his own game.  

And as far as the baby part, it may happen or not but it won't be for a while (let's NOT COMPLICATE THINGS MORE! hahaha. )

There are a few bad guys, 

Lord or King Which technically is Simoes's dad,  that was a weird one even for me but if she was saved with a 100-year-old spell then it would make since her dad be a vampire too. and unlike the org. IIL story none of the boys were with her mom (an original character for any of the org. IIL stories) I wanted to leave it open like that so you could pick any of the women and make than her mom or create your own. lol

The mom only plays a part in the back story nothing more. 

The women of this book I wanted to be stronger adn not as stupid at times as the ORG. IIL women but still giving her her own crazy dumb moments. 

so, in short, this book is her learning the truth about who she is, learning to trust and yes even vampires adn also save them from victor's doom. 

She has to learn skills she doesn't know she has, loves these men, learns battle strategies adn more to overcome her mission. 

Victor, Lorie, and a few others are bad characters of course. 

and I feel like there should be a surprise villain in this but I'm not sure who or what yet if at all. 

I do want her to make other friends along the way, but again I keep forgetting all the new people I add in lol and how they play out in this book. 

I hope that I do a good job for you all reading this and that I can build the plot up and then bring it down again keeping the story seamless and enjoyable throughout the writing. please know I do sometimes have to go back to read parts of the last chapters to make sure the new ones fit accordingly (or names) hehe. so if it takes me a little longer to get them out for you to read Just know I want them to be good chapters keeping you engaged and interested. and each new chapter is a new direction or creation I am leading these characters throughout so it takes time when I am trying to keep it with the vision I have. 

PS. how do you all like Chapter 28 "Vision me this"  it was a glimpse into the future chapters of the book. or the possible future of the book with her battling victor adn the guys. 

ALRIGHT!! I will end this for now. NOTE THAT I will add another of these at some point to ask how the book is looking to all of you and to keep the feedback open to new suggestions or ideas/comments. All of your love, support, and feedback are such a value to me encouraging me to keep going. I know my writing skills need some improvement but that fact you keep supporting me and reading my creations means the world to me. Thank you all so very much. 

Thank you again, 

Always MG