Let's give you a visual for this.
Good fanfiction: "Kiera sat alone on the park bench, leaning back against the concrete. She could feel the soft breeze of the wind through her burgundy locks. She waited alone for him, the man with the layers who told her it wasn't safe to talk just anywhere. She didn't understand having to meet here at night, she would much rather meet at some motel during the day."
Lets fix it.
"kiera sat alone on the park bench leaning back against the cool concrete she could feel the soft breeze of the wind through her burgandy locks she waited for him the man in layers who told her it wasnt safe to talk just anywhere she didnt understand having to meet here at night she would much rather meet at some motel during the day"
so much better
make sure you do the latter guys
-MK
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