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I am once more going to give you a visual.

Good Fanfic:

"Brendon could barely make eye contact with Ryan. He had just done the very thing they had agreed not to at the beginning of their 'arrangement.' Brendon had fallen in love. Ryan was still too stunned to speak, he just kind of sat there, staring at Brendon until the words fell from his lips, 'I think I love you too.'"

Bad Fanfic:

"Brenden culd barely make eyecontact witn Ryan. He'd just done the very thig they'd agreed not too at the begining of there 'arrangement.' Bden had fell in love. Ryan was too stunned two speak, he kinda just sat there, staring at Brendon til the wirds finally fell past his lips, 'I think I luv u 2.'"

Sea? Git difference?

-MK

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