Cover: The cover is beautiful and is most definitely eye catching, the font is clear and visually appealing and does not take away from the cover image. I like the overall visibility of it.
Blurb: The blurb is very well written and is appealing to the stories target audience. It's short and sweet and does not reveal too much about the actual book.
Summary/Review: The story, though beautiful definitely has room for improvement. There's little bits of it that could be improved in order to capture the audiences attention and hold it.
For starters, the tense. Though it's told in the first person, the book is written in the past tense which is something that most readers do not approve of, I think it would be better if the story was either changed to be told in the third person to be kept as a past tensed story or for the tense to be changed.
The Grammer is - in my opinion - excellent, however if the paragraphs were shorter it would be easier to read. There's no need to remove words from any of the chapters, however leaving a line between every couple sentences does make for a more enjoyable reading experience.
I do applaud the author for correcting any possible spelling errors, I did not manage to find a single one whilst reading it which is an extremely difficult task to accomplish.
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