Cover: I like the cover, it's simple but beautiful in my option.
Title: The title has a punch to it. It's simple but makes an impact.
Grammar & Punctuation: With all that I have read even while being sick with Bronchial Pneumonia; I didn't see any errors actually.
Plot & Blurb: Your plot is amazing. It definitely packs a punch for readers. Your story never left the plot itself which is fantastic. Keep up the great descriptions on your stories.
Writing style: You have a unique writing style. It isn't hard to read and understand however your writing is unique in itself. I really enjoyed it.
Tips: Honetly, I don't have any tips. Besides when you write. "......." "......." "......."
I would put it as the following;
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I'm dyslexic which my brain is odd when I read. So, it's easier for me to read stories when they're written how I showed you because my eyes cross and I have to reread what was written in order to figure out where my eyes veered from. But that's just a personal opinion.
Reviewer's personal thoughts: The writing is phenomenal. The grammar and punctuation is flawless as far I can see. There wasn't holes in your plot. Your blurb gave away a slimmer of what the book would be about. I love how your characters interact with one another. You can feel their feeling which is hard to do. Your work is incredible and also congrats on being featured on Stories Undiscovered.
