010. Ashley (Eda)

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Title: AshleyAuthor: sodapopxtremeReviewer: Eda_evans

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Title: Ashley
Author: sodapopxtreme
Reviewer: Eda_evans

Cover: I think you've done a great job with the cover. The title, plot, and the cover are perfect in contrast.I just feel it's a little simple and can be easily copied by anybody, so you've to pay attention to it.. If you like it don't change just look out for it

Blurb: I think you've written it very well... Like it's short and at the same time intriguing. A perfect blurb to my taste..

Grammar: I really like your writing style.. And your vocabulary is also skilled.. I don't know why you want a review when your book is so accurately presented

Summary: only thing I feel you need to improve is your word count of a chapter.. Like they are short.. You should try to make them atleast 800-1000 words long.. Also look out for your cover.. I know it's quite a short review but believe me, it was so hard to search for a flaw in your book... I'm really impressed!

 I'm really impressed!

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