Cover: The cover is brilliant. I love the flags like buttons on the cover.
Title: Title goes with the cover and the story.
Grammar & Punctuation: I found a few run on sentences. As well as punctuation errors.
Plot & Blurb: The story never steered away from the plot.
Writing style: The writing style was easy to read.
Tips: My personal tip(s) is go back through and proofread your story. You don’t need to have a space before the “……” which I saw plenty.
“I fell in love once.”
Should look like;
“I fell in love once.”
The spacing isn’t needed when speaking. It’s not a new paragraph; it’s just dialogue. If that makes sense.
Reviewer’s personal thoughts: Reread your story and fix minor mistakes. Like the space before your character that’s speaking. Go back through and fix your run on sentences with either a period or semi colon. That will fix your punctuation errors. Some errors like this can make a reader exit off the story; I don’t want that for anyone. Your grammar is perfect. I didn’t spot any problems there. Other than that; I enjoyed this book. Hopefully my review doesn’t hurt your feelings; if so I’m sorry. 🫶
