The Author Games: Literature

Pre-Game Evaluations

Paella and Pluto have both evaluated the tributes based on the information given in their forms to create an overall score of where they seem to land as a threat/how long they will survive. At the conclusion of Literature, a post-game evaluation will be created that will reflect how accurate these predictions were.

Please note that these evaluations are mostly based off of what has been said in the tribute's form, not the quality or length of the form. We apologize if some of you were worried about this as your writing has improved greatly from the time you wrote your form. The quality of the writing shouldn't affect your feedback too much, unless your form had an alarming amount of mistakes to the point where it took away from the information presented. These tributes generally scored lower than a 7. Additionally, this score will NOT count towards any rankings.

District 1 Male- Flame Pheonix Pirkas
5 (Paella)
7 (Pluto)
6 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You say you are fun behind the rough boy you present as, yet you have a flaring temper as soon as a single word is uttered incorrectly? How is anyone supposed to break that wall and see the better side of you? Your manipulative traits can be beneficial in some situations, but you strike me as a rather spoiled child. Also, red eyes? That's more than a bit peculiar. Honestly, I don't really like you, Flame.
Pluto's Feedback- Something about you really shows some potential, but I have no idea what that may be. Your... interesting appearance I can get past, but I recommend trying to hide those neon looks. Manipulative- that can be a good trait- don't abuse it, but don't leave it unearthed. Give the Capital a show with that and you may get a sponsor or two. Try not to be so angry; I don't like anger when it's not needed.
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District 1 Female- Ruby Grace Faberson
10 (Paella)
9 (Pluto)
9.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I admire the selflessness you have for your sisters, but it can also be a bit of a downside in the arena, so be sure to take care of yourself. Your relationship with your father intrigues me, Ruby Grace, and your perspective regarding perfection gives me a different outlook on life. I hope to see your hidden spark in the arena.
Pluto's Feedback- I loved Quartz Faberson! The games those year were so exciting, so I am expecting some high expectations with you. A spark in you, a "Flame" as the other District 1 tribute may look, is very important, and a lucky thing to have. I love the determination, but the trusting part may need to change. An ally is never a bad thing- always take note of that, and try to put some trust in it.
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District 2 Male- Ares Finn
8 (Paella)
7.5 (Pluto)
7.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I am sorry you are unable to trust our government, though I can't blame you. You have quite the scarring past; I do hope your flashbacks don't drive you to insanity. You're a Career, but that's about all I see in you. Too many children in Panem have dead family members for you to really stand out, and too many are determined to win.
Pluto's Feedback- Some force is in you, Ares. It's clouded over by smoke. I see a spark, and some touching backstory, but really an empty slate. Try to build something out of yourself, and maybe shine some spotlight on emotion. I am displeased with one thing- not wanting to be a cold blooded killer. How unfortunate. I wanted to see some bloodshed from some careers.
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District 2 Female- Slate Welby
9.5 (Paella)
7.5 (Pluto)
8.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You are weak inside, so keep acting. I don't want to see a Career break down into tears during the Games, unless you really need to. Slate, I'm having trouble giving you feedback- you remind me too much of myself, besides tarnishing the family name. My weaknesses are yours, and I wish I could say you would win, but I can't guarantee anything with how easily you can be shattered.
Pluto's Feedback- How... sweet. You are a weak career, if I have ever seen one, and trust me, I have. Your main weapon- how deadly. You barely made it up with the spear. You seem very fake; try to act yourself out of your crying fest into an actual victor. I look forward to seeing how you play out, whether it's ending as a victor or a coffin.
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District 3 Male- Conn Sephra
10.5 (Paella)
11 (Pluto)
10.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Okay, I'm not usually one to judge on appearance, but how can you hate your hair? Seriously. Damn. Hot damn. Pain is also good- that you can resist it, because you may feel a lot of it during your time in the arena, Conn. Your alliance qualities are astonishing, and common sense will get you far. Unhappiness is not always something to hide, though. Overall, you are quite charismatic in my mind.
Pluto's Feedback- I need some water, because I am thirsty for you. You are the dream tribute, the tribute I always wanted to have, to see, to experience. Everything about you is perfect. You're strong, and cunning, I hope you see you make it far. I hope to see you as a victor, and if you do become one, call me.
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District 3 Female- Rosella Van Carter
11 (Paella)
10 (Pluto)
10.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You are the girl I wish I was as I grew up. I genuinely admire your intelligence and wish I had been able to gain it so effortlessly. We have a lot in common, Rosella- I'm excited to see how you fare.
Pluto's Feedback- District 3 is looking very strong in these games, if it continues I see another upcoming career district. You have both brains and brawn, with some fire to keep your forge going.
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District 4 Male- Kanai Lathan
8 (Paella)
9 (Pluto)
8.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I have never been a fan of class clowns, or clumsiness, but if you can manage to show me your intelligence underneath the goof, I might grow to like you more. Kanai, my impression is that you are a typical District 4 tribute- do something out of the box and perhaps I'll be impressed.
Pluto's Feedback- You have a resemblance to an extremely old Victor I once read about, his name was Finnick Odiar, or something along those lines. Extroverted is a trait that comes to mind when thinking about you, use it wisely and you may get some fans to adore you. I see some potential, but you really need to play all your cards correctly.
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District 4 Female- Katelyn "Kate" Dodger
8 (Paella)
7.5 (Pluto)
7.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You seem quite... average, which I can't say I'm the biggest fan of. Personally, middle is boring, not "the best place to be". Your wits do show a bit of promise, however.
Pluto's Feedback- A very simplistic life you live, Katelyn. I can't say that I hate you, but you have little "pazaz." You'll really need to change yourself if you want to make it far in this year's Hunger Games. I recommend the tip of STANDING OUT, something you don't seem to know.
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District 5 Male- Montgomery "Monty" Bean
7.5 (Paella)
6.5 (Pluto)
7 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You're so young, Monty... I can't honestly say I see you lasting very long. You're still a child, and you have no place in such a ruthless competition. I do hope you manage to last longer than I predict. You have warmed my heart, but your weaknesses... I just can't see you getting past them.
Pluto's Feedback- Your imagination can take you places, I hope all of them good, but there is no good way to put this. You. Will. Die. I'm sorry to break the truth. You are a child, you have some abilities, but not that many. I do wish for you a peaceful ending, as all good stories do. You have met your final dragon in these games, and it may be just too daunting to get the princess.
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District 5 Female- Esther Tehnos
9 (Paella)
9 (Pluto)
9 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Positive attitude is something you will definitely need soon, so keep it up. Your photographic memory fascinates me, honestly- it's a trait I wish I had. You seem like a very happy person, a rare thing in Panem, so I hope you don't lose that over the course of the Games. Your wariness of killing will most likely pass, however- the arena can make one do things they'd never expect.
Pluto's Feedback- A sob story, how perfect! Make the Capital pity you and you have the chance to defy odds. District 5 doesn't seem to have a good outlook this year, with young tributes, but I see a fire in you, whether it be the hair, or that "Slim Chance" of returning home, I really do hope you can make your brother proud
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District 6 Male- Devin Eifa Alvah
6.5 (Paella)
6 (Pluto)
6.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You, like some others, have quite a temper, and although I know it can be difficult to control your anger, you really need to get a hold on it. Rage will so easily get you killed. It's good that you have such a talent evaluating your enemies, but the Capital doesn't easily get behind a tribute as quiet as yourself, so try to open up a bit.
Pluto's Feedback- You have a very unique sense of style, if it can be called that. Your backstory is one of that I've never seen, it is very exotic, and, interesting. I see some failures coming your way in your future if you don't be careful. But don't worry. You might cause some disruption if you put up a fight before you death.
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District 6 Female- Ashlyn Roxen
7.5 (Paella)
7 (Pluto)
7.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Having a parent die is difficult, I know, but if you're having enough trouble with it that you have to see a therapist, I don't see you lasting very long mentally. Every game is better when there's an insane tribute, but I see you breaking down and dying rather than losing your mind. Being quiet isn't always a good thing, either- you'll have to learn to emerge from your shell quicker if you want to be noticed.
Pluto's Feedback- A touching and sad backstory. A definite tear jerker. You seem a bit weak, if just saying the word "mother" makes you break down. Have that sadness be turned into rage, or determination. Changing that can really give you a fighting chance in these games
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District 7 Male- Theo Easton
9 (Paella)
10 (Pluto)
9.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I like your personality, Theo- you are a soloist, yet at the same time attract other people. It is unclear to me, however, the reason behind your anger. What has broken you so deeply that your fury is as strong as you state? Is it your father? I do hope you make it back for your family though- you seem to love them very much.
Pluto's Feedback- Theo, you show amazing talents, and I think you may have what it takes to win these games. One problem I see, is your distaste for Hunger Games. I, being head gamemaker, find this slightly offensive, but I can get this past that, hopefully. Don't try anything too risky in the arena, and you might slip past that snide comment.
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District 7 Female- Aspen Kinsley
8 (Paella)
7.5 (Pluto)
7.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I sympathize with your size disadvantage, Aspen. However, your communication issues may make it difficult for you to gain the support of the Capital. Your brother isn't here to talk for you, dear. Hopefully your creativity will help you find a way around that.
Pluto's Feedback- Don't fret about being alone. Some of my favorite victors managed to win their Hunger Games solo, and you may be able to do the same. You have some victor in your blood, but you need to "Work it" to really make it far. If you want to succeed, I recommend letting your sister go, however hard that may be, and look to your brother.
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District 8 Male- Syne Nighes
10 (Paella)
10.5 (Pluto)
10.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Scars... they always add something interesting to a person. Your lack of vocal chords might prove to make things more challenging for you, but I can tell you've persevered in communicating. You are a survivor, Syne- I see you lasting a while.
Pluto's Feedback- I see myself in you, besides the unfortunate past, of course- you being an orphan, and obviously me being one of the Capital's high elite. I feel that being quiet and seeing things through will be a vital thing in these games, and you have that talent. You are mature, and I appreciate that. I hope to see you make it far, but I'm not sure if I see you taking the crown just yet.
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District 8 Female- Rii
9 (Paella)
8.5 (Pluto)
8.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I can see why you and Syne developed a bond as tightly knit as you did. I hope you can keep your happiness alive, Rii- you're one of the rare beams of sunlight from an outer district. Be careful to contain yourself, though. A few impulsive, poorly-worded statements can completely change how many people are on your side.
Pluto's Feedback- I truly do hope that you and Syne stay together. You look like a budding power couple. And look, I don't care if you hate each other really, but if you play that love card, there will surely be some oblivious sponsor that will eat that up. Who doesn't like lovers, entwined in fate, trapped in a battle where only one can survive? I can almost see the drama happening before my eyes.
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District 9 Male- Giles Mazer
11 (Paella)
10 (Pluto)
10.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I like you a lot, Giles. You have a good ratio of physical training to intellectuality, and being independent is good. I hope this doesn't result in an inability to trust though- you're perfect ally material, and sometimes an additional person on your side can be a good thing. Your past intrigues me, and I hope for your sake it doesn't come back to haunt you. All the same, if it does, we'll have an interesting games this year.
Pluto's Feedback- First of all, you are extremely talented, if I may state the obvious. You have a beautiful mix of intelligence, common sense, and some pretty exotic, or snazzy talents. A study of animals can be great in normal games, but I can ensure you that these games will be far for normal (wink wink). Same could be said for a love of geography. One flaw in your beautifully handsome fabric is your despise of murder. You are entering a game of life and death, and if you don't enjoy the former, you will have the same fate as your mother.
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District 9 Female- Eliza Clarkie
11 (Paella)
8 (Pluto)
9.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I can't deny that you bring a smile to my face, Eliza. Your devilish personality may not get you far with others in the Capital, but I absolutely adore it. It is very good to be able to be indifferent in scenarios such as the Hunger Games, and you seem to have that down perfectly. Innocence is a perfect disguise for you- I hope you make it far in the arena.
Pluto's Feedback- That might actually be a tear coming out of my eyes, but probably not. Your story, I really do hope it has a happy ending, but I cannot ensure that. You have little strengths, and your weaknesses can overpower you. Can't innocence make you look as a easier kill? Unless you bait the other tributes well, and are strong enough to take the fight, I can see you getting into a bad situation.
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District 10 Male- Roy Scofield
10 (Paella)
8 (Pluto)
9 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Your lack of empathy seems promising, along with your intellect. I understand the loss of your brother has affected you greatly, but you cannot let his memory be a weakness. Don't let the voices in your head take complete control. Considering your district and past, you are quite promising, and we wouldn't want that to go to waste now, would we?
Pluto's Feedback- I sense some tiny fringes of Schizophrenia, that would be a shame if that developed after such a scarring experience in the future. ;). I seems like with that voice leading you, we may have a slight inside source. Aside from that, I do hope intellect makes you strong, these games won't be just brains, expect equal physical exercise. I can't say I'm thrilled with you in general, maybe you'll sway my opinion. Just to me, you don't seem that special.
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District 10 Female- Arura Bay Akpofure
11 (Paella)
9 (Pluto)
10 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- As long as you don't end up attaching yourself to some hopeless tribute, I see you making it decently far in the Games. Your physical condition and charisma will definitely be beneficial. Opinions are something we share, and I'm glad sometimes you can keep your mouth shut(unlike me) because there is a time and place for independent thoughts- the Capital, no, but most certainly the Games if you choose to ally. Don't lose that determination, either- too many tributes simply give up.
Pluto's Feedback- The baker was definitely correct- you have a fire brewing in you, and it can burn down Panem with it. You trust too easily though. It's a nice trait to have, but in this situation an ally can put out your determination in one small flick. You have have even seen this with your brother, how someone so close can do something so horrible, after all the trust you've put into it. I don't see anything special or unique about you, but I feel as you can wow me soon, or at least, I hope so.
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District 11 Male- Shadow Thantoes Morte
6 (Paella)
5 (Pluto)
5.5 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You have the right personality to go far, but you have weaknesses that make me question your ability to survive. Mostly, your deafness- not being able to hear someone or something sneaking up on you could be deadly. It will also make it difficult for you to communicate with the Capital- they will not like you. I know you can't do anything to reverse it, for which I am sorry, but I speak the truth. Also, keep your anger under control. So many of you explode with emotion- I hope all of you manage to stay out of trouble before the games begin.
Pluto's Feedback- How........... interesting. I feel as though you are a snowflake, a special snowflake. Have you ever seen a snowflake, being in that poor, poverty-stricken District 11? You see, each snowflake is... different and unique, and, well, you are a very unique snowflake! I hope that you, Mr. Snowflake, don't melt on your way down :).
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District 11 Female- Regan Twiyl
5 (Paella)
4.5 (Pluto)
4.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I'm finding it quite difficult to get past your blindness, unfortunately. Your hearing and smell may be "developed", but sight is a sense that is extremely hard to live without, let alone through the Hunger Games. In addition to your small size and lack of strength, I honestly don't see you surviving very long.
Pluto's Feedback- Being blind is not a great thing, how did you even manage to walk on stage at the reaping? You seem to have some very daunting weaknesses, ones that are too hard to overcome. These games you need to work, and you need to react. As being blind, you will be missing out on about everything. But you might not even experience that, as no doubt you might not make it past training.
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District 12 Male- Marcus Silverhand
7 (Paella)
7.5 (Pluto)
7.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Wow, you have an intense past... I feel like that will affect you in the arena, though. Beliefs always result in sticky situations, but if you can hide your feelings like you say you can, it shouldn't result in too much of a problem for you. I don't know about you, Marcus. You don't have a lot of substantial weaknesses(except maybe your weapons, they aren't the most effective), but for some reason I'm not totally confident in you. Prove me wrong, please.
Pluto's Feedback- If you win the games, check out the capital. We love stupid superstitions. There's one, that if you throw a diamond over your left shoulder and it lands in a moonlight area of your penthouse apartment, luck will come your way. But, of course that means you have to win. I like your weaknesses, unlike many others. Ghosts, an outlying subject for many people, can be daunting, especially since you will have to witness the death of people in these games. Who knows, maybe you'll see your owl at the reaping?
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District 12 Female- Avalynn Feldspar
8 (Paella)
8 (Pluto)
8 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You have grown wise from books, I can tell, but you strike me as quite damaged. I'm also slightly confused as how your imagination can be your weapon, but okay. It's good that you don't get attached to things, but I feel like you'll need someone to watch your back in the arena if you're so dreamy; you make it seem like alliances will be difficult for you. I don't know about you, Avalynn- we'll have to see how you do in the arena.
Pluto's Feedback- I have a liking for you, the thinking of those imaginary worlds. I tend to do the same. The Capital tends to grow weary after living there your entire life, so making new worlds helps escape from this...... wonderful terrific country that no one would ever want to leave from. I do hope you somehow manage to find a weapon. Imagination isn't the strongest of weapons. Don't rely on it.
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District 13 Male- Nick Eckhart
6 (Paella)
5.5 (Pluto)
5.75 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Another deaf tribute, wow! We have a surprising number of disabled tributes this year. I'll give you the same speech I gave to Shadow- even though you can't help your lack of hearing, it will prove to make things very difficult for you both in gaining the support of the Capital and surviving in the arena. All the same, you are one of very few tributes happy to be in the Hunger Games, which is a nice change. Like many others, however, you have a scarring past. Unfortunately, I don't see anything different in you. Do something that will make you stand out, Nick, and I might reconsider.
Pluto's Feedback- So short! Darn don't you hate it when you're 6 feet tall? I mean no guy could ever live being under 6 Feet. Darn, life must suck for you. Not a great way to start off with me. You were also... unfortunately given to trait of being deaf. That must be a ear ache. To my knowledge, hearing is often the second most important sense in a Hunger Games. So with that sense gone..... Good luck kiddo.
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District 13 Female- Xavi Uriendah Liason
5.5 (Paella)
7 (Pluto)
6.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- I'm having a very hard time figuring you out, Xavi. You are "bubbly and a happy girl", but you hurt people? Where did this come from? Is there a psychopath in my games? All the same, you seem rather hardworking, and I admire your perseverance in taking care of your grandmother(not terribly psychopathic traits, so I'm still quite confused). Lastly, don't make promises to your girlfriend you can't guarantee are true.
Pluto's Feedback- Paella is being a bit of a negative Nancy, if you couldn't tell. Some of your strengths will be of no use to you in the games, you won't really ever have to cook........ Like ever. On another note, how can a weapon be a disadvantage? You seem to be a confusing character, but I love solving puzzles, and you might just entertain me long enough to survive past to blood bath.
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Capital Male- Kolya
10 (Paella)
8 (Pluto)
9 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- You will definitely have the Capital on your side, young man- charisma is a key trait in the sponsor system, and you have the bonus of your district. I am glad you won't back away from a challenge- you'll face many in the upcoming games. Loyalty, however, maybe result in problems for you, as not everyone has those same morals. Taking orders is something I have issues with, too, so I can't give you much advice on that- though I think you'll be more or less in charge of yourself in the arena. Take care of your sister, no matter how much you claim to dislike her- family should come before all else.
Pluto's Feedback- I am like, in love with you, and no doubt everyone else will be too. Too bad I can't get attached to you, as no doubt you will perish, sorry for being a bit harsh. I see that with sponsors, you can build a rocketship to Jupiter with everything you will get. You are brave and strong, with a touching backstory. You should know how to play the card correctly. But, your downfall may be you being rash, as well as your apparent illiteracy.
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Capital Female- Nadia
7.5 (Paella)
5 (Pluto)
6.25 (Final Score)
Paella's Feedback- Although I'm not usually one to judge a tribute by age, yours may prove to be a significant disadvantage. Politeness may be "cute", but you need to find your voice if you want to be supported. I'm sorry, Nadia, but frankly, you need to grow up. Pain is something you will see a lot of very soon in your life.
Pluto's Feedback- Are you even eligible for these games. You're like, 6? 5? You look so young. Playing an innocent cuteness card can help you immensely, Your small size may help you only in small situations. But luck will eventually run out. I do hope you meet a peaceful end.