In A Matter Of Seconds [Under Editing]

Extras

So, looking back at this story, I've noticed that I put a little extra things in there, and I have decided to share those with you guys. 

1. Lily (Collins)

Now, I had originally introduced Lily (Hastings, not Collins) later on in the story, but I decided to push that earlier in the final story

2. Break-Up

Barry and Emely were supposed to break up towards the end of the story because of the fact that Emely didn't tell Barry about her parents. But being the good writer that I am, I decided to let them break-up at the beginning of the second story

3. Paul (McCartney)

No, I'm not talking about Paul McCartney. I'm talking about Paul, Emely's taxi friend. Paul wasn't supposed to give Emely a ride to S.T.A.R Labs in the first chapter. Originally, I had planned for Emely to approach a man and he would take her to S.T.A.R Labs. But, I liked Paul and wanted to set up a pre-introduction for him, so I put him in the first chapter.

4. Alice in Wonderland

Emely's Aunt Alice was technically not supposed to be in the story. I didn't write her in because I didn't really think about putting her in the story. But as I was rewriting the story on here, I decided to put her in, mainly because she knows about Emely's parents and raised Emely like she was her own. 

5. POV

Before this story, I used to write in First person POV. But as I wrote this story in that POV, I began to think about how it would look if it was in Third person. Now, keep in mind that I've never written in Third person before, but I think this actually came out pretty good. What do you guys think?

6. I still get Jealous

I had originally planned for Emely to be jealous of Felicity during the time after Emely realizes that she likes Barry, but Barry hasn't realized that himself. Emely was jealous because Barry and Felicity were close and Emely thought that they had dated before or were something special to one another. But as I was rewriting, I decided that nobody could be mad/jealous at Felicity. I mean look at her. 

Well, that's all I could think of today. I wanted to thank each and every one of you guys who read this story. And I give a shout out to those in the UK reading this. It means so much that I have readers not only in the US but in the UK as well. Thank you guys again. I love you all 💓😘