Twenty three// Mistakes lead to your death

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enjoy the 3d and last BOOM BOOM chapter ( side note: i'm really sorry)

"I know what I said was bullshit." Tim said "I didn't mean a single word. I was just mad."

"I get it, Jacqueline is known for making people mad." Mark commented.

"Tomorrow morning I'm going at her house to apologize."

"You do that."

It was Friday night, Tim and Mark where walking down a street heading to a club. They just wanted to take their minds off of things.

"I just don't want to lose them." Tim said again "They are my friends after all."

"You shouldn't, they are good guys."

"Even if Don stole your crush?" Tim asked.

"Even if he stole my crush." Mark sighed "Jacqueline is an amazing girl, she's smart and beautiful and I don't want her to be with me if there's someone else out there you makes her happy."

"I get what you're saying."

Tim and Mark walked in the club at around 12 o' clock.

They drank some beers, but didn't get drunk and then danced with some girls and had fun.

After hours they decided to leave the place and go home.

They were walking there since none of them had his own car and the club was pretty close ot where they were living.

"It was so good tonight." Mark said.

"It was amazing, dude." Tim agreed "I really needed to get my mind off of things. We should do this again sometime."

"Definitely." 

"What the hell are you doing?" a man's voice said coming from a side street, some feet away from them.

Tim and Mark looked at each other.

They both wanted to know what was happening.

They peeked their heads from the corner of the street and saw him.

It was Douglas.

And right back there, wearing a short dress was Elaine.

"I don't want to keep doing this anymore, I already told you!" Elaine told him.

"But you said we were in this together." Douglas insisted "You gave a promise to me."

"I think we should leave." Mark whispered.

"You can leave if you want, I'm not disappointing any more of my friends." Tim whispered back.

Mark of course didn't move an inch.

"I don't want to keep doing this, we have to stop it now that it is still early." Elaine said "Don't you see it destroys us." she tried talking some sense in him.

Douglas chuckled "I said I needed someone to do this with me, you agreed. It is 'till the end right?" Douglas was holding a syringe "Now take it." he gave it to Elaine.

Elaine stared at it for a moment. "Please, don't hurt me like this." she pleaded.

"You're a disappointment." Douglas said looking down at Elaine, he grabbed the syringe from her hand and stabbed it in her soft skin, emptying the interior in her system.

That exact moment Tim knew what he had to do. 

He ran and hit Douglas on the back, making him fall flat on the floor. "What the-" 

Before he could get up, Tim got on top of him and started punching him and hitting him wherever he could.

Elaine left out a surprised gasp and just stand there watching. It was nothing she could do.

She spotted Mark standing there watching the scene and then running away from it.

Coward, she thought.

She was about to run behind him when Douglas got her foot and she tripped, falling down and hitting her head hard on something.

The last thing she saw was Douglas turning them around and being on top of Tim, hitting him.

"Tim, no!" she said before darkness consumed her for good.

 Douglas kept hitting and punching Tim, the poor kid was nothing in front of the 23 year old guy.

He was getting one punch after the other until he could take no more.

"You think you can save your friend?" Douglas mumbled. 

He caught Tim from the hem of his shirt while still being on top of him. His face was all swollen and covered in blood. 

"Do you want to save Elaine?" Douglas said and banged Tim's head on the ground.

"Do you think you are a hero kid?" he said banging his head one more time, this time harder.

"I think you have to try a little bit harder than this." he banged his head on the ground one last time and the ground started getting covered with blood.

When Douglas saw that, he froze. "What have I done?" he looked at Tim and then back at Elaine.

He ran next to Elaine and checked her pulse. She was still breathing.

He walked slowly next to Tim and checked his pulse to, it was faint, but it was there the boy was alive.

Douglas left a sigh relieved they were both alive. But he and Elaine had walked there and he had no car to drag the two unconscious body, and he couldn't risk walking with them.

Or letting Tim right were he was. He had only one solution. He had to call Jack.

He got his phone out quickly and searched through his contacts.

Jack 

He tapped on the contact and waited.

The beeping that could be heard was eating him alive. Douglas Stevens was ready t freak out any second now, and all it could take for it to happen was this phone call.

If by any chance Jack was not picking up, he was screwed and probably ready to go to jail if anyone saw him.

His hands were full of blood and his shirt and pants too. His face was probably swollen and bruised and he could taste some blood dripping from his upper lip.

But all these worries left him when he heard Jacks voice from the other side of the phone. "Hello?" he said.

"Jack, I think I fucked up."

Hello luvs!

Finally we got to the goodies. I hope you loved the BOOM BOOM chapters as much as I did.

An another think I wanted to say is that we have so many ghost readers, please just like and comment on this story if you like it it's free!

I also noticed that we got 400 views and I decided that when we get this story to 500 views i'm going to make a bonus chapter from a point of view of someone from our little group here hehehe

Anyways you know the deal, have a great day & a wonderful life! xxx


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