I made this book when I was like 15 or 16 and rereading it shit there are a lot of plot holes that I'm cringing 24/7 at number one WHERE TF HAPPEN TO THIS MAN DISABILITY like no little me someone don't change over night. So fuck that I assume this nigga was faking shit unless he had it when he was little and start using it to his advantage either way it's fuck up.
Two Egypt is my favorite character... She's comic relief and my everything, but why she gotta be a hoe😂, I can't believe I make this child a damn homewrecker damn sis wtf
Three William child name 😑" clear "... Really?
There's more I can fuckin complain about but not gonna im 18 now about to graduate and at first I was thinking of rewriting but no because one that's to much work and two there are a couple of people who like the book. So I seen that I was gonna make book2 and I think if I do that my first step is to fix MAD PLOT HOLES because sis shit don't change over night. So um yeah happy to be back but in all words I hate half of this damn book 😂😂 please leave a comment if you have anything else to critique because right now I'm straight up bashing myself.
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RomanceI take care of this man. He is 26 years old and his name is Sebastian. Sebastian have heh a medical problem.. H..he's smart in some ways and sweet it's hard to take him out in public when people gives him stares. He sometimes twitch and talks to hi...
