Just Common

Atlanta & Jacko

Well, I want to say, this will probably be the last chapter on Common's chase to get his man. That is if Common doesn't get long winded, Common tells the story not me. I think most of you writers will agree with me. Is it Miss Virginia or is Doc a part of this, what about Ted? So my reading sleuths, are you ready to see who it is? Remember follow those clues.

Well folks have seat, good ta see ya again, an welcome back. Folks we start in Atlanta, no need ta bore ya on my ride with Maggie. Although it was might intrestin my it was. That be a story fer later. So shall we!

Folks we didn't check in, nope we went straight ta the Croft Institute. Folks checkin in as is proper was not on my mind. Just gettin this here killer, an gettin Miss Helen back was all I wanted. The lady at the main office was a might nice, told me exactly where Doc was. Folks it seems Doc had a whole floor fer his use. Third floor Mental Health Sciences. She say turn left out this buildin an follow the path ta the white brick buildin. Doc be on the third floor. His office first door top the steps on the right.

Folks, I could see, Maggie was ready fer her vengeance. Tell her by the Law, Maggie by the Law! Folks I was about nervous as cat under a rockin chair. Maggie she looked just normal was all. Don't know ifin it was just bein young or vengeance pumpin through her blood.

Folks I didn't knock on Docs door, motioned fer Maggie ta move ta my left as we walked in was all. Oh befer I go on, best tell ya, why they beat us ta Atlanta. Well folks got stuck in a storm ta beat all storms I have ever been in. Near sucked away by a twister! Hell on track Common stay on track now! Sorry folks.

Well we just bust on in, more like opened the door an strolled in folks. Oh the reason why Maggie went ta my left, folks my right hand is my strong side. So Doc stood, I say now Doc, best just sit, an start talkin, keep those hands where I can see thum!

Doc say, now Common, we just needs ta talk, I'll explain this all have a seat please. Maggie had that hatchet a hers ready throw at Doc, my looked ready ta just do that ta, ya know throw it! Maggie say I just stand ifin ya don't mind, rather be ready ta end ya. Folks she say that just like a calm day, no breeze just still an peaceful like. My Shield a put the fear in ya.

Doc say, Common sorry had ta thump ya like that, thins just went ta hell in tic was all. Didn't want ta harm ya, just some thins needed done. Didn't need ya ta foul thum up was all. Doc I shouts, put a goose egg on the back my head fer a week! Damn ya Doc ya betrayed me! Why I oughta shoot ya! Now tell me, where is Miss Helen an Miss Virginia an that Ted? Doc say in good time, first our killer. Well folks this here, is where I say, guess who it is. Ya know, Miss Virginia say she was Jacko, but is Jacko the real killer? Mean look could be, she thinks she is right. Ifin Doc is right about three different people in her. So now guess? Then ya tell me here. Folks we a stop here, start up again next time. Promise folks so guess.

Well, like I said, Common wants a guess. Like he said just because Miss Virginia say, she is the killer. Doesn't mean she is. Could she be protecting Doc or Ted? Vote leave a comment on your thoughts. Thanks for your support.