Achievement #40 - The Ascension

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The Ascension

Heart beats alone

Dower times ahead

Teary bleak faces

Lined empty roads

Rainy skies above

Soggy pants adorn

Bowed crowd mourn

Merry vicar prays

Vivid pyres burnt

Fire's ashes spent

Freed after death

Tribe Elder woman

Walks ahead among

Eden's godly lands

Meets Saint Peter

Enter pearl gates

Joins other souls


Footnote: With the choice of using only five-letter words, this poem was surprisingly difficult to write, particularly from a flow perspective I think it could have been a bit smoother. But most importantly it succeeds in capturing the sadness of a tribal elder's funeral and her spiritual journey taken shortly after, but like all things, it will be down to your personal perspective.

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