we're gonna be someday (earlier draft)

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This is the earlier draft of "Someday" that I wrote on my message board a while ago!! What do you think of this compared to the published version (in this book)?

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"Joshy, do you think we'll really be together in the future?"

Josh smiled and kissed the back of her hand. "I promise, Liv, forever and always, you'll have my heart. Someday, I'm going to put a ring on your finger, you'll walk down the aisle in front of all our closest friends and family, we'll have kids, then grandkids, and grow old and gray together. It's you and me forever."

"Someday," she sighed wistfully. "We're gonna be someday."

Unbeknownst to them now, that someday would never come. 

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