Quit Bugging Me by sandydragon1
What I loved: I love the whole concept of this story. It's what drew me into this story in the first place. The execution of the worldbuilding element is also flawless with appropriate discussion on its themes.
The plot and pacing are absolutely flawless and perfect for this story. The characters and their dynamics are also really, really good. It has a diverse cast and representation which is admirable. The writing is spotless and I really can't offer any more advice or complaints. You're just too perfect. xD
What didn't work: None.
What to improve: Also none. xD
Final verdict: Can I go 10000/10? Jk. 10/10 because this story just hits all the right spots in terms of plot, characters, and technicals. Keep writing and keep shining. I'm excited about what your interesting mind can conjure in the future. <3
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