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What I loved: EVERYTHING. I love everything. I love how the poems keep coming back to their themes like the sea, drowning, the strings, and the eternal fight to stay afloat or let one sink. The symbols are so spot on I just wanna cry in a corner. I feel like it's a personal collection too, so personal that it's easy to connect with its lines, messages, and the spark of hope it's trying to give at the end. I love the progression of poems and the struggle incorporated within them. It's just amazing. Really amazing.
What didn't work: Nothing.
What to improve: Some punctuation errors and wrong word usage but other than that, it's really, really good. Nothing a good edit wouldn't fix. Really, really minute stuff I got here.
Final verdict: This is another solid 10/10 on my scale. The poetry, the message, and the themes are just so handled and presented well. Keep writing. Keep doing what you do. Sooner or later, you'll get to where you want to be. You've just earned a fan in me, as well. uwu.
