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Jupiter Bleeds by aphrodeiities

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Jupiter Bleeds by aphrodeiities

What I loved: This collection just made me sad and reflect a lot about the gods, love, and the thin line that humanity shares with both. It centers on the Greek myths and the people in them. Sometimes, though, the persona is another being apart from the myths entirely. The whole collection just screams elegance and I'm in love with it! uwu. The verses and the rhythm involved are superb as well as the symbolisms hidden inside the lines. I also like the intentional lowercaps that makes everything look more majestic. EVERYTHING. I love everything in this collection!

What didn't work: Not so much as a "didn't work" since it can be avoided with editing so I'll skip to the next section.

What to improve: There are bouts of punctuation errors and some formatting errors in the collection but none too bad to affect readability. Just a quick fix and the collection will be sparklingly golden. *chef's kisses*

Final verdict: This is a solid 10/10 on my scale. The themes, the poetry, and the aesthetic is just enough to make me fall in love with this. uwu. Keep writing and shining! You've just earned a fan in me. uwu.

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