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What I loved: This story is such unique in terms of flow, premise, and overall emotional impact. It's got the timbre of an emotional story and the hope of an uplifting one. I love, love, love the narration and the way it captured the human feelings of being left alone and moving on on your own. I also think it's really creative to be able to build a story from nothing but songs with the same premise/word: breathe. Such great. uwu.
What didn't work: I think everything worked out for this story since it's just that perfect. lol.
What needs improvement: Just a minor nitpick, really. Maybe add spaces between certain paragraphs so the flow could be better? I think that's all. xD This story is just amazing.
Final verdict: This is a 10/10 on my scale because of all the reasons listed above. Such poignant prose and premise that all led up to a promising conclusion. You might have just earned a fan in me! Keep writing great stories and keep shining! :)
