[2021] - XIV

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What I loved: Like its predecessor, this collection is oozing with learning and poetry, rolled into one. As much as I have loved the first one, I love this collection even more. The themes involved are the same as the first collection, which is adoration to the old gods and that they're never really forgotten. I love the personal touch leaking from the verses and lines of poetry as well as the beliefs that the poet let shine inside them. It introduced me to a world of wonder and well...I love it. uwu. That and that this collection is well-researched. Too well, in fact.

What didn't work: Nothing, really. I am a poet and I know enough to never dictate what works and what doesn't in poetry. xD Everything is just valid. lol.

What to improve: Typos, formatting errors, and wrong word usage. Nothing too bad and a good line editing wouldn't fix. Everything else is just magnificent. uwu.

Final verdict: This is a solid 10/10 in my scale. It's a collection where you'll not only enjoy poetry, you'll learn about mythology as well. Keep writing. Keep searching for the mysteries and bringing them to light. You are a unique gem in this vast world of poets and writers. As I said before, you have earned a fan in me. uwu.

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