Proposal{9}

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Tobias' POV

I am stood with Tris below the Ferris wheel and unfortunately Miley and Ash had already climbed the wheel so Tris didn't even think about it.

It didn't matter, we are right below it and I have the ring in my pocket. I am beyond scared right now. I don't even know what I'm going to say!

I have the ring in a black box, it isn't very well protected. As I take the ring out of my pocket, a paintball hits the box staining a purple dye into the outside.

Tris shoots at them and then stares at me wide eyed. Now I'm scared of what she will say...

I get on one knee and now know exactly what I will say.

"Tris, Six, Beatrice, my girlfriend, my survivor. Who ever you are named as, you are the same person to me. Every time I wake up in the morning I am shocked to see you still here with me, being the dick head I can be sometimes... And I am so sorry that when you are trying to be serious, my eyes wander if you know what I mean." I wink. "And if you don't stay with me fourever you will miss my charming smile and rock hard abs." I do my smile, she blushes and jabs me in the stomach. "But you are there for me and I am always going to be there for you." I take a deep breath. "So Miss Prior, will you become a Mrs Eaton and marry me?" I ask sounding a bit nervous at the end.

She still looks at me like I've gone crazy.

"Tris, Baby? Are you okay?" Just then her face changes to a Cheshire Cat grin and she screams "YES" right in my ear whilst hugging me. I pull her away quickly, put the ring in her finger and we kiss, for a long while I think.

She studies the ring. It is a simple titanium crossover band with a small diamond in the middle of the cross over. It is black for dauntless and I guess the stone is kind of fray for Abnegation, but I don't know...Maybe?

(Picture attached) She stares at it with glee in her eyes.

"Do you like it?" I question. "Tobias. I freaking love it!" She squeals "It's perfect!" We kiss again and then we are under attack.

This is war...

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"WE FREAKING WON!" Ash screamed. Yes, she got the flag, mine and Tris' team, again. I am so proud. No-one even got close to our flag, it was pretty well hidden if you ask me.

I am still so shocked that I managed to propose to Tris. "Hey baby, what are you thinking about?" Tris asks leaning her head on my shoulder as we dangle our legs out the train cart.

"I am thinking about us girly, we are now engaged! I just can't believe I get to spend the rest of my life with you." I reply. I lean down and kiss her head. I tilt her chin up to kiss her on the lips.

No-one is in this carriage, Zeke and Uriah have taken the others to the front carriage so we have the front. Zeke knows, I told him and he helped me find a ring, even though he was completely useless...

Still none of the initiates know we are now fiancés. How I don't know. We must be good at hiding it. I hate not being able to kiss her whenever though. It's just like when she was my trainee.

"Tris baby, wake up, were home." Her eyes open sleepily then close, reacting to the light. We stand and jump.

All the initiates are already off the train and walking ahead. Tris falls slightly against me and I get worried, "Toby I'm tired" she says yawning. I chuckle and pick her up bridal style. her head is against my chest but one of her arms is hanging down probably sending all the blood to her hand.

"Bro, I'll sort out the transfers for you. And you won because we let you." Zeke says seeing Tris. "Nah mate, we won because we are best and if you say anything more about this now, I will punch you were the sun don't shine" I say with a serious voice then smirk. "Kay, Uri... Lets bounce" he looks terrified as he jogs away and I head to the apartment.

When we are through the door I go to our room and plop her on the bed, kind of gently. I take off her jeans without looking so she doesn't feel to exposed, even though we have seen each other naked. Not sex yet, just naked. I then take off her jacket and top. She is so beautiful, and she is my perfect girl.

"Toby what are you doing?" she asks stirring from her sleep. "Baby I'm just getting you more comfy for bed is that okay?" I coo. "Mmhmm" she replies.

I get one of my shirts out of my drawer and pull it over her shoulders.

"Goodnight my angel, I love you."I say

"I wuv you too" she sleepily says.

And with that, I fall asleep feeling happy about our day off tomorrow.

*ring- I do not know how to upload a photo. It won't let me. Please let me know if you know because it tells me that only txt is allowed?!?! like wtf.... look on my insta ali_oh_my and I have a picture of it on there. Please dm me if you know how to because I really want to be able to!!!!

A/N

So another chapter sorry it took so long. Also, cred to Veronica Roth, I will be adding in my own characters as well. I got some of the proposal speech came from the speech Nancy said to Darren in Hollyoaks, I am a fan so a few of their characters will appear.

BTW 550+ FUCKING READS HOLY FUCKADOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you all.

~Ali~ ⠀ོ ⠀ོ ⠀ོ

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