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1st POV
"Hi guys, we...uh..." Can anyone help me? Pan 'came to my rescue' "Boys, Good to know you waited up for us. *he continued with a deep dangerous voice* Scram!!!" His dangerous side can be kinda hot. Where is that coming from? How dare it come?!
We talked about something before...
Yea... Sorry? :(
Pan smirked at me, "Penny for your thoughts. You know, I noticed that you are becoming more prone to looking at me and zoning out. Something you like?" I rolled my eyes and crossed my hands which made Pan stare at my chest, "EYES' UP HERE!!!" "But I like what I see!" I coughed and choked on my saliva. So much for a brunch...
Why do I constantly have a desire to strangle Pan?! Well, we should better get going 'cause I was getting real hungry. I could practically eat an entire chicken. Nahhh, it will not be enough, I could eat an entire elephant. Too much, way too much. I rather eat a turkey. Yea, no offense, but it would be enough for me. Uh ho, my stomach was practically screeching for food. I better hurry before my stomach tears me apart, climbs out of me and goes on a food-fest...
Violent much?
Shut up. Pan brought me back to reality, "Hey! Mandy, you here?" I look up to him, "Nahh. I am not here. I am in my favorite book." He rolled his eyes "Hey! You practically kill me when I roll my eyes, but when you do, it's no problem!" "Yeah, it's kinda the point." I stomp my feet on the ground like a 5 year old "Not fair." He chuckled. I walked past him, hitting his shoulder on purpose. Why? I hate his very presence. Let's just go away from him...
An arm snaked around my waist pulling me back to a very hard chest. The owner of the arm whispered into my ear, "You can't leave without a proper bye." Yeah, Pan. "What are you, five?" He turned me around, he had a mischievous smirk on his face. "Maybe." " Are you done?" I ask trying to push him off me. "Bella, don't you understand that you can't go for your picnic unless I let you." I looked straight into his eyes, "Let me go, Pan."
"What's the magic word?" "Please?" "Nah ah! It's Pan is really handsome." "You? Handsome? Please, don't make me say a big lie." "Sweetheart, I can stand the whole day here." "Not much of a problem to me. But don't blame me if my stomach rips me apart and crawls out of me and eats you up." He chuckled, "Duly noted.:D" We stayed like that for probably 5 minutes. "Are you letting me go now?!" "Nah, baby." "Many boys have passed by and they looked at me as if I had grown 3 heads!" "So?" "Let me go!"
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Freedom: A Peter Pan Story
Fanfiction"So you see, Neverland is not a bad place. It is supposed to be the place of our imagination and magic. There is always trouble round the corner, that's what makes life fun over 'ere. Otherwise, we would just be sitting on our asses all day staring...