Hey guys! Welcome again. I hope you enjoyed the last chapter. I'm sure it was rather funny and so unlike Amanda who has been rather serious for a lonnnngg time. I thought it was about time Jake saved the day...
So, today is gonna be all about Derek. He has been in the shadows for far too long. And I think all of you, my lovely readers, want to know what Derek is actually like. Is he a good big brother or a boyfriend material ;)
Sure, I will allow some chemistry between Amanda and Derek or Liam or Jake or Charlie. Who do you prefer?
Soo.... as you all can see I have put up a new video^^^. Be sure to check it out. I am in love with that song. Well, I was then I found out shawn mendes had also sung with the vamps. Now that was like killing two birds with one stone. I am so sorry, I am literally rambling and sure, by now I am way too predictable....
As you may have seen, I have made way too many changes in the start of this book. I was 14 and terribly in a crush, with no idea what to deal with it. I am not quite happy with my writing so, if you see a different stuff, don't fret, you are not missing any major news, I have just made it more descriptive. I intend to do more so in the future, obviously...
So my lovely readers, I know my note for this chapter is way too long and I have taken a lot of space which I could have used for the chapter. Well, I just wished to speak to you guys, and I wanted to send you my thank yous for your support and it really means a lot to me. It makes me want to write more for you....
So, as much as you'd like me to stop my rambling, I ask you to please tell me your feedbacks and above all, vote if you consider this story worth it. Thanks a lot, guys, I really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart ....
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1st POV
I ran and ran. But soon Pan caught up to me. He pulled me into him by snaking his arm around my waist. I tried to get away but it was too late. We were both in hysterics, laughing. He wiped some of the cake cream slash icing on my nose. I giggled in response and so did he. Realising my current state, I looked down in disapproval, because I noticed my clothes were all covered with icing and sugar and cake. Thanks a lot, Pan!
Well, my darlin Pan, note the sarcasm, thought it would be marvelous to wipe some more icing on my hair. Normally, I would have screamed in frustration but my body decided to keep on laughing at Pan's stupidity. I better give my body a lecture on how to do what I say, not spontaneously make a fool out of itself and me. It was a pleasant evening and I didn't want to take another bath.
Sure sissy, as if you took one this morning....
My dearest, you don't have to announce my hygienic life in public like that!
Sure, I do. It's of national importance...
Well, let's not start this debate again. So, back to where I was...
Of course, Princess, I'll leave you be....
I really don't have time for all this dramatics...
Yeah, but you have time for your darlin Pan.....
Sweet! You know, you are more bitter than Pan sometimes...
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Freedom: A Peter Pan Story
Fanfiction"So you see, Neverland is not a bad place. It is supposed to be the place of our imagination and magic. There is always trouble round the corner, that's what makes life fun over 'ere. Otherwise, we would just be sitting on our asses all day staring...