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IromaVP - Inheritance - The Dark Sorcerers: Book 1

Title: Inheritance - The Dark Sorcerers: Book 1
Chapters read: 12
Score: 8/10

INTRODUCTION:
Inheritance is a gripping and beautiful tale of magic, responsibility, and action. It follows the story of Kenna, a sorceress born with the ability to harness both aspects of magic: light and dark. She sets out into an unfamiliar world, with the task of saving the whole world from dark magic. A truly fantastic story filled to the brim with action, a completely unique and entertaining plot, and relatable characters.

What I LIKED about your book:
Starting with character-building: for me, your skills here are like a double-edged sword. The positive aspect is that these characters were built with a level of authenticity, accentuated by creative character details and realistic emotions and actions. You've built your characters with unique traits that made them stand out individually and make them shine in certain situations. Frankly, my favorite was Kenna's, as she struggles to not only adjust in the real world, but also to the constant fear that her dark side may overpower her and would push her into the evil.

I like how you depicted these characters' emotions and actions, very balanced and restrained to the scene. The way you described and wrote how these characters felt is praisable, always writing it with no restriction and thus, opening us readers into their very minds. I may say, as an example, that Kenna's thoughts are beautiful and pitiful at times, yet sometimes I find her emotions and her recklessness destructive, and this adds to your character's authenticity, everyone should have a negative side.

The details are great, viable to my taste. It's a mix of information and color, not too much information that the paragraphs become too bland, and not too much color that the words become meaningless. Actually, I found the combination informative and entertaining at the same time, not to mention, artistic also.

The scenery was not forgotten also. Paired with your character descriptions, illuminating details, and beautiful displays of emotion: most of the scenes in this story are a colorful burst of action and drama that leaves a lasting impression.

Kenna's past is revealed in quite a climatic manner that really draws all of the attention. It was the perfect opportunity to execute the moment. Certain events slowly building up, leading to her revelation as a dark sorceress helped with not only invoking interest but also in the plot itself.

What I DIDN'T LIKE about your book:
I have mentioned something about your character building earlier and here it goes:

I can confidently say that the positive side greatly outweighs the negative side, but I do think it's worth mentioning the negatives also. I just found that some of your character descriptions were vague at times. Often generalized in Kenna's point of view. I think these should be emphasized further, especially when it came to Rowan, as he's always categorized as 'handsome' yet what did that handsome mean? Perfect nose?

Lastly, there were small instances of awkward phrasing of sentences but that's all!

CONCLUSION:
Staying in my library, yep.

If you all read my earlier reviews, most of you probably know that I'm not a fan of fantasy stories but I actually found myself enjoying fantasy stories here in Wattpad the most.

And yes I enjoyed this and would definitely read further into Kenna's journey.

Great work! I couldn't say much other than this is a well-made book that deserves mor attention!