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KnightsofEmpires - The Wolf and the Hound

Title: The Wolf and the Hound
Chapters Read: 8/8
Score: 7.5/10

Spoilers!

INTRODUCTION:
The Wolf and the Hound is a fun novel filled with hilarious flirts, a rather comedic and comical way of narration, hot-ass main characters and wolves and witches in an urban type of environment.

What I LIKED about your book:
The details were absolutely gorgeous. Your wide array of vocabulary has made your detailing skills colorful. The details were also absolutely extravagant, often incorporating metaphors that add life to it while offering a fair amount of information about the characters and surroundings that it sounds like a true scene, and not some word vomit or infodump that would've disappointed.

I like it that you've installed intrigue and mystery early on in the novels. The way you twisted these characters paths sure hooked me into the story. Vincent's pursuit of witchcraft for a seemingly deadly curse while Ally's navigation of a shady merger with Vincent himself, all while uncovering details regarding her father's murder. These plot devices really drew me into the story. It just created a yearning and curiosity in me to continue reading forward and find out what happens next.

The characters and dialogue were on point in here also, especially when it came to Ally's rather comedic narration. When it came to body language and emotion, you've captured it well and partnered it perfectly with the corresponding dialogues.

The characters were also vibrantly detailed, It's definitely commendable that you actually used windows of opportunity to introduce and detail your characters more instead of just feeding the information to us readers. The latter just makes it look like the author's thirsty for interested readers.

What I DIDN'T LIKE about your book:
Though I liked your use of metaphors, the extensive use of it would've been overdramatic and had some effect in some of your scenes. Although metaphors and details added color, you had to select the few that is most relevant to prevent the scene from being overdecorated.

The plot was also quite cliche in some points, to the point that it sounded like a generic romance. Office meeting? Cliche. Two CEOs? Cliche and predictable. Bar with a secret lounge for supernatural beings? Cliche and predictable. Though it's to be praised that you used these cliches to not only help your plot, but also to generate interest in your story!

CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed it.

Yeah that's a very generic statement but it was authentic. I love how sarcastic and petty Ally was in some scenes and that sick ass action scene at Roman's office definitely made me love her more.

She's really a break from wattpad romances damsel-in-distress female leads, she made it clear that she can fend for herself.

Anyways, update some more! The story's a disappointingly 8 chapters long only.