Does this even make sense? Like could you guys be honest with me. Is my writing like going down hill? Is the book starting to seem rushed and not making sense? I would like honest feed back please.
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Manipulative (DISCONTINUED)
FanfictionHe's got him in the palm of his hand. Closed in his fist, smashing all that he's worked for. His family, his job, his success and especially pride, all what was taken by the power of sex and the blindness caused by lust. But still He comes running...
