Book reviews of books on Wattpad that I've read!! I will do my best to be honest and try not to fangirl too much.
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The first line is amAZING. Is perfect. So perfect it made me smile. I love it so much, I am now emotionally attached to this single line XD you can pry it from my cold, dead hands.
I love the main character from the get go. She's relatable and three dimensional. The plot is wonderful. One thing about the plot I would point out: the skip in time felt a little rocky. It was like missing out on growing to love the ship, kind of. Mentioning a few things they did with each other or having one of the characters reflect on what has happened that the reader missed out on, would help that if the author doesn't want to include that section of the relationship for time reasons.
When it comes to the main character's wound, I feel like the reader got splattered with it too quickly. It feels strange for her to open up about something so awful so easily to the romantic interest when it obviously still hurts her a lot.
It felt too easy.
However, I do think her behavior matched up well with her wound.
The setting is wonderful XD college life is... it's... yeah.
Grammar is good!
Characters are good!
I read several chapters of this and very much enjoyed it. Your writing is developing very nicely!
