Wattpad keeps recommending me "stories" that are just hypnosis scripts, promising to hypnotise the reader. I think it would be more fun if you made some effort to make it an actual story. Include a character having some fun, and just enough hypnotic language so that if the reader wants to play along, they can focus on the words and feel it as if it's happening to them. And this is my first thought:
The story starts out in the first person; unnamed narrator, home alone. She's tidying up, and finds a bunch of papers left behind by one of her roommate's friends. She takes a quick look to work out what kind of document it might be, and who to give it back to. She quickly realises that it's a story; erotica. And though this gives her a pretty good guess of who's written it, she keeps glancing back and reading a little more. She finds that imagining where this story might go has turned her on a bit, and while there's not going to be any distractions, she's curious about where it's going to go.
The story is about a young woman wishing she could be with a guy she likes, when he finds a way to make the distance matter less. She calls him and talks to him about what they wish they could do to each other if they were closer. And while the characters are chatting, he starts slipping in the hypnotic language; getting her into a light trance and suggesting that she feels all the things he describes as if they were happening to her; and that in future she will always feel the things he tells her to feel. He works on building her arousal, and using pleasure to reinforce all his suggestions. She's touching herself while listening, and isn't quite sure whether she's listening to a story over the phone, or actually experiencing those things. At the same time, the original narrator is reading a story about this, and she's also a little unsure about whether this is a story she's reading, a story someone's telling her on the phone, or something she can feel. Her imagination seems more vivid than ever, and when Master orders her to cum she finds herself obeying automatically, so proud of her ability to feel exactly what she is told. Of course, the more she enjoys it the more real the fantasy becomes for her.
When she finishes reading the story, she's sitting back in amazement about how good it was; and wishing that Master was closer so they could do that for real. It takes her a few minutes to realise that she doesn't have a master, and the guy is just a character in this story. But then she realises that the story hit her buttons so exactly, giving her exactly what she wanted. So maybe the guy who wrote it might be interested in doing some of these things to her. She resolves to ask if he can show her how it feels to be a slave like the girl in the story; and maybe even use the same tricks to make her feel her obedience more intensely.
He isn't here now, and she can only fantasise. But she promises herself that she's going to think about him more, and look forward to the day he can really make her feel the submission she is craving.
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💡🐇 Naughty Thoughts
RandomThis is a book of ideas, to go alongside my books 'Plot Babies' and 'Plot Bunnies'. These are the naughty ideas. They might include smut, hypnosis, kinky romance, or other adult themes. Ideas for regression and ageplay stories are in my book 'Plot B...