Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version)

Chapter 75

!!!!!!!!!!Author's Note!!!!!!!!!

Hello Everyone! Happy Friday (technically Saturday)! I hope your week went well. Mine was busy, keeping me occupied so I didn't think about what's going on with me, so that was nice. I had a rough day on Wednesday because I'm starting to run into deadlines with trips we have planned and if this isn't cleared up by then, we will have to cancel them. At the rate we are going, that could definitely be an issue and I'm not spending that kind of money if I can't even participate. Long story short. The doctor started weaning me off the steroids and my issue returned just like it did last time. I don't know what the solution is long term, but I can't be on prednisone forever. He wants me to start this new medication but it has to be pre-approved by my insurance, which takes time that I don't really have. I see him again on Thursday next week. That's where I'm at, so I tried to keep busy so I didn't dwell on it. Oh, on the upside, I'm getting two new tattoos this weekend, one on each inner wrist so that will be fun!

Anyways, this is the last week of Brad and Gabe torturing Jesus. We see Jesus' "vision" continue and play out, which totally breaks him in the end. Brad and Gabe have been watching this whole time laughing their asses off. Brad ends the illusion and then they explain to Jesus that none of it was real and that Brad was messing with him the whole time. Between that and the end of the vision, Jesus is completely struck down and broken. He even willingly walks into his final torture not resisting at all and dies permanently.

Please pay attention to the trigger warnings this week. It deals with religious subjects, extremely graphic violence, torture and extreme gore. This one gets gross towards the end. If these things trigger you, maybe skip these parts or this chapter. You won't miss anything important.

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Chapter 75

*******Trigger Warning for Religious Subjects, Extreme Graphic Violence, Gore, and Torture*******

Jesus is still in shock of this visitation by God himself. He feels so much better about what's going to happen to him when he dies. Jesus has read the bible and has read about such visitations from God himself, Angels, and various other holy beings sent by God. He has also read about the different miracles that God has made happen, either directly from himself, or indirectly through his use of holy beings and even his own son. He just heard God say that he will stop this torture, take away his pain, and guide his soul to heaven. God has granted him mercy from all the horrible things he has done and wiped his soul clean, allowing him to enter the kingdom of heaven. Jesus takes a moment to bask in the light and love of God. The figure standing in front of him, God, smiles and allows him this time. It looks like God is getting ready to ask him something, when God, the figure in front of him, is stabbed through the heart, by some fiendish creature. The creature then pulls the special knife from God's heart and uses it to slash God's throat. Now God is bleeding out so quickly that there isn't enough time to do anything. Jesus watches what is happening, and he runs over to try to help God from dying, but it is too late. God caresses his face.

"I'm sorry, my son. You will be guided to heaven when you die, just not by me." God says before he takes his last breath, his hand falls from Jesus' cheek and dies.

"Nooooooo!" Jesus screams.

Jesus is devastated that God was apparently killed by some horrible creature. How did this even happen? God is omnipotent. God can't die, right? Jesus goes back to God's body to see if maybe he will come back and continue to reign over the kingdom of heaven. When he shakes God's body, nothing happens. God doesn't rise from the dead. God is truly dead and he's not coming back. Jesus gets very angry and goes looking for the horrible creature. It appears to be standing off to the side, admiring his dirty work. Jesus stands. He is seeing red as he makes his way over to where the creature is standing, his hands drawn into tight fists as he approaches him. When he gets close, he tries to take a swing at the creature, only to be stopped in midair. Jesus is frozen in place and cannot move at all. What the fuck is happening? As he gets a better look at the creature, he recognizes who it really is. This creature is the Devil, and it even has the horns and red tail to prove it. It has red skin that matches the bright red suit with the black shirt beneath and the bow tie that it is wearing.