Okay, bago ang lahat. You really, really, and I mean really need to read this. First thing's first, SO GUYS. What do you think of my story, lately?
I hope you don't mind but there's a comment that really bothered me. Though, thankful ako sa comment niya.
Okay lang ba sainyo na mag-ask na magcomment atleast kahit anong puna every chapter? I'm new to Wattpad. Even sa story na 'to ay bago pa lang din ako kaya hindi ko pa masiyadong gamay ang pagiging action writer.
Like what've said, I am not as good as any other authors out there but Im sure binibigay ko lahat for this. So, what I'm saying is I REALLY NEED TO KNOW KUNG ANONG TINGIN NIYO SA BAWAT CHAPTERS.
It'll be a big help for me para alam ko kung kailangan may baguhin, or ayusin sa pagbibigay ko nang character sa characters. If you know what I mean.
Anyway, I HOPE YOU GUYS WILL HELP ME. Para na rin sa ikagaganda nang story. And sa patuloy na nagbabasa nito, Thankyou very much and enjoy reading.
So, since I'm done.. Here's the next chapter for all of you guys.
AND I WONT UPDATE UNLESS YOU COMMENT!
CHAPTER FIFTY-ONE
JAMILLA's POV
Awfully nervous is just an understatement kung gaano ako kinakabahan ngayon. My body is literally shaking. Kulang na lang ay lumabas na sa dibdib ko yung puso ko.
How did Jared know? Saan siya nakakuha nang ganoong impormasyon?
I've thought of lying.. pero alam ko ring hindi iyon gagana sa ngayon.
“Why don't you just tell him the truth? It's not like everything's gonna happen. If I'm not wrong, si Mrs. Smith, his mother, ang client natin. And your loverboy can't just dump you. It's in the contract.”
Maging si Jessa ay tumango kay Franz, “I guess he's right, Jam.”
Hindi makapaniwalang tinignan ko sila. “No. You don't understand.” Napatingin ako sa bintana ng kotse. “Jared... may issue siya sa Secret Agents.”
“That explains it. Sucks for you.” Tumatangong sabi ni Franz.
Napabuntong hininga na lang ako. I know, they're doing their best to help, but it's not enough. Walang makakatulong sa akin ngayon kundi ang sarili ko. :|
“I felt so weak! Shit.” sabi ko at mahinang sinabunutan ang sarili ko. “At ngayon.. first time! I'm busted!” I frowned.
“There's always a first time in everything, Jam.”-jessa
Ilang minuto pa ang lumipas ngunit wala pa ring desisyong nabubuo sa isip ko. For once, I thought I'm a noob.
“We're here, Jam. I'm sorry to say but we'll head back to pur headquarters after you get out. Kailangan pa naming makapagreport kay Chief bago tayo bumalik sa Romblon.. or so I thought if you still want to go back with us.”
BINABASA MO ANG
[MAJOR EDITING] G&G: Im the Secret Agent Secretary♪ [COMPLETED]
AdventureCURRENTLY "EDITING" THIS WHOLE BOOK. STILL WANT TO READ IT? YOUR CHOICE. ;) P R O L O G U E I am not called 'Officer Jamilla Alcantara' for nothing. Kaya naman hindi ko matanggap na sa lahat pa ng agents ay sa akin pa ibinigay ang pinaka boring...