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The Question

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The Question

A solid "Yes"?

Fingers crossed, not a "No"...

How Loren would answer

AJ didn't know


His heart beat faster

As Loren walked in

His legs turned to jelly

As she kissed him good evening


He made her a dinner tray

And told her to take a seat

Noodles, wonton and meat buns

with all the brownies she can eat


And when she was done eating

He showed her a surprise

It was his mother's puzzlebox

with the prize hidden inside.


With curious eyes and gentle hands

the singer took the box

She turned and twisted, pushed and pried

but none was up to task.


"Give it here, Loren," AJ said,

"I'll teach you how it's done"

But Loren wouldn't have it,

"I'll solve this on my own."


She tried and tried, but failed again

The box just wouldn't give,

"Maybe I should use a hatchet,

I can do it with one hit."


AJ started to panic

He revealed from where it came

"It was my mother's, Loren,

And I'd be honored if you kept it safe."


"I don't think I can take it,"

was Loren's short reply

"Its a memory of your mother,

a remainder of her life"


She returned the box to AJ,

As he invited her for a stroll

They walked the street in silence

Until they reached the hill


They took a seat beneath the tree

And watched the sun go down

AJ handed her the box

And showed her how it's done


Left side one turn,

Right side three

One more turn

It opened with a click


Loren's eyes widened

when she saw what was inside

A gold and jade bangle

with an intricate design


AJ took the bangle

and held her hands tight

He knew its now or never

He looked deep into her eyes


"Do you remember when we first met?

You walked in the cafe, clearly upset

I'm really happy I made brownies that day

If not, maybe I won't be here with you today


I'm just a simple man, Loren

but I promise you this

I'll be your best friend, your shoulder to lean on,

and a great dad to our kids.

I'll dedicate to you everything in my life,

Ms Loren Order, will you be my wife?"

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