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Hey guys, hope you all like the beginning of this story. Though the start seems like similar as from our favorite serial but I tried to put lots of changes and twists and turns to make it exciting... 😊

Here's next part for you all. Keep voting and give your comments🙏

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Whole Agarwal family was busy in dancing and celebrating the success of their daughters whole heartedly... Anand, being very optimistic always believe in encouraging girls' growth and their progress in life... but to his dismay, all other elders from their family doesn't have same thinking...

No one noticed the intruder entered in their house stealthily glaring to them dancing and enjoying... their fun moment came to halt suddenly hearing someone shouting madly...

Taiji, "O Bai, jara bhi laaj sharam baaki nahin hai in sab ladkiyon me... aur hogi bhi kaise jab Maa hi aisi hai... aur Anand ji aap to sar par baitha lo in ladkiyon ko... dekhna ek din naak na kataai toh inhone aapki..." she said pointing to all three girls and Bela who lowered their heads knowing her rude behavior towards them...

Anand tried to calm her, "arey Bhabhiji, naaraj mat hoiye aap... aaj to Naina Preeti ka result aaya hai aur bachche bas isi Khushi mein naach gaa rahe the... aapko pata nahin ki Naina ne pure Ahmedabad me Top kiya hai aur Preeti ki bhi first division aayi hai iss baar... dekhiye newspaper me photo bhi chhapi hai Naina ki... hamare sabke liye kitne garv ki baat hai na..." he said looking at the little girl trying hard to make her invisible hiding behind Bela...

Taiji crushed the newspaper snatching from Anand, making weird face, "yeh sab naatak dekh kar bas aap hi khush hoiye... agar Top kara bhi hai toh kaun si badi baat hai... saara din kaam se jee churane ka bahana karke bas kitaabon mein jo ghusi rehti hai... vaise bhi kaun sa pad likh kar teer maar legi... aakhir jana toh sasural hi hai donon ko ek din... mein to kahungi bas ab yeh sab chhodo aur donon ko ghar grahasti ke kaam sikhao... Isi se ghar ki Ijjat badegi varna bina byaahe padi rahengi zindagi bhar bojh ban kar aapke sar par..."

She smiled widely adjusting her pallu on her head, "arey agar itna hi khush hona hai to Pralay babu aur Arjun ke result par hoya karo... is saal pure 45% aaye the mere Pralay babu ke... yaad hai na maine saare mohalle mein mithai baanti thi..." she feels proud on his son's success who hardly interested even in going to school...

Saying this as proud moment for his beloved son, she took the halwa bowl and turned back to leave with another taunt, "huh manhoos logon ki shakal subah subah dekh ke lagta he poora din hi kharab jayega... Bela, meri chai mere ghar bhijwa dena voh bhi Preeti ya pooja ke haath sirf..."

After completing her morning quota of taunts, she left with leaving a beautiful and innocent girl in tears. Naina immediately rushed to her Chachaji and hugged him tightly. Anand kissed her forehead and hug her tightly in his embrace to safeguard her from all devil eyes with wet eyes. Even if he is the guardian of Naina, he feels somehow failed to stop others hurting her...

Naina in his mind:

Aayina Dekh Kar Tasalli Huyi, Hamko Is Ghar Me Janata Hain Koi...

Anand caressing her head, "beta tum janati ho na bhabhiji ka swabhav hi aisa hai... unaki baatein dil se nahin lagate... mein aur teri Chachi hain na tere saath aur mere rehte meri beti ko kisi aur ki jarurat nahin..." Bela also came ahead to give a soothing hug to Naina alongside Preeti and Pooja... their fun and enjoyment suddenly turned into a sad moment for them... this is a daily routine and behavior of few elders in this house since Naina birth...

Naina's birth story...

Rama, wife of Rakesh and mother of 1 yr old Arjun, lying on death bed post deliver to Naina. She was too weak and during her initial months doctor prescribe to terminate the delivery but being orthodox attitude, elders of the family didn't allow her. Which in turn results to threat on her life.

Kuchh Ankahi Baateinजहाँ कहानियाँ रहती हैं। अभी खोजें