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Review: Stay With Me

Reviewer: Secret or BTS_Believer

Review For: ghostair

What I reviewed
All the mistakes I can find

Notes
- This really is an editor’s job, but I don’t mind reading and looking through for mistakes though.

Chapter 1
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 2
- The paragraph issue from Behind the Smile is evident in this book as well.

Chapter 3
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 4
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 5
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 6
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 7
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Chapter 8
- No mistakes at all in this chapter.

Overall Review
    The paragraph issue is back in this book as well but I honestly couldn’t care less right now. I think you have a knack for giving me the saddest books to review for you. I’m serious, this book started out so sad and I couldn’t read it without feeling some sort of sad emotion.

You have no idea how good you are at writing stories like this. This book doesn’t even have any mistakes and yet, you ask for mistakes to be found. Please stop being modest, you are truly an amazing author and I can’t wait to see what you do next with my emotions. In all reality though, I’m not an editor and I only review books for the plot, pacing and character development. But I’m glad to have the opportunity to read your books.

Thank you for requesting here!