Ineluctable Fate By: Alias_Ivy Fantasy Filipino and English
Disclaimer: I am not a professional critic.
All details are just my opinion. I might be wrong; I might be right. I just provide A PERSPECTIVE that may help you improve your story. Kung paniniwalaan mo man o hindi, susundin mo o hindi, kaiinisan mo or hindi, ay depende na sa'yo.
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Legend: 🏅 - 👍 or ❤️ 💤 - 👎 🏳️ - suggestions or corrections
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🏅I like how it sounded when I spoke it. 🏳️However, the previous title, "Three Familiar Faces," is more appealing to me. Though "Ineluctable Fate" seems pretty and sounds uncommon, it really just means a future that cannot be changed. Many titles out there entails the same and the plot is kind of hinted here. "Three Familiar Faces" sounds common and is actually generic but it masks the plot and has a room for exploration. It just points out the main character/s. It already satisfies the impression as I read it and I am so intrigued as to how it will be justified inside the story. Plus, I like how you used "Familiar" here entailing encounter in different timeline. I think it is pretty brilliant though it is a simple word.
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