The following evaluation is just a perspective. All details are just my opinion. I might praise the story or say things that are not that pleasant to know. These, however, do not define the worth of the book nor the author. Readers have their own preferences. I am only giving a detailed analysis and assessment that may help improve the story. It is not my intention to offend or hurt anyone. If any part of this critique did, I sincerely apologize. Lastly, the author has the right to follow or not follow any suggestions I would give; to agree or disagree with my remarks.
Thank you so much for entrusting this critique to me. It is truly an honor.
Warning: Spoilers ahead!
Legend:
🏅 - 👍 or ❤️
💤 - neutral or 👎
🏳️ - suggestions or corrections
Note: Hesitant pa ako bigyan ito ng critique dahil prologue lang ang nakita kong part pero ang last update pa ay October 2020. If ever man na napansin kong may nadagdag someday at keri pa, dudugtungan ko na lang ang critique na ito. Sa ngayon, proceed na ako sa prologue.
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TITLE
🏅Anyone who'll read it will know that it is an action story.
COVER
💤 Hindi maganda ang placing, style, at blend ng font
🏳️Siguro gawin mo itong inspiration.
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DESCRIPTION
🏅It is okay, but polish it as some sentences isn't good in terms of structure.
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